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“. . . Men are that they might have joy.” - my favorite scripture from the Book of Mormon, 2 Nephi 2:25

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I Breathe Enjoyment

I breathe enjoyment from
the senses that God bestowed on me.
With the gift of sight I find joy
taking in scenes of sunset splendor;
catching sight of random rainbows,
the prettiest of which I’ve noted
arching over waves of Iowa grain;
gazing into the adoring eyes of my beloved;
and on happening to glance anything
bright or beautiful to behold.

With the gift of hearing, 
I delight in the cries of glee
of my grandchildren
tearing open Christmas presents.
I discover incredible information
listening to videos and
learning from the students I teach,
whose own differing cultures and traditions
enlighten me more about the world.

I glean pleasure from sounds of nature:
the rumble of water gushing down mountain cliffs;
the rippling of rivers and ocean tides;
the call of pretty birds in spring;
the meow of a tiny kitten;
and my mind sways in rhythm
to the music on my radio.

With the gift of voice, I happily sing
the lyrics to my favorite tunes.
With my mouth I also relish my sweetheart’s kiss.
I take pleasure too in savoring spicy foods
that make my taste buds pop 
or in tasting the cold deliciousness 
of ice cream on my tongue.

With the gift of smell, 
I capture whiffs of fragrant flowers
and aromatic perfumes.
I know the petrichor left by rain,
and I scent my mother’s bread and lasagna
baking on a Sunday afternoon.

With the gifts of touch and feeling,
I can fling myself into waves of sea
in joyful abandon, 
feeling the sea fresh and crisp
and the sun so warm and inviting 
on my skin.
I can feel soft sand beneath
my feet while walking hand in hand
with my sweetheart’s fingers stroking mine
and anticipate the wonderment
of his tender caresses in the night.

The greatest bestowal of God on us all
is the sense of feeling
that does not physically touch us.
This final gift, which I revel in,
lies in the many moments
brought about 
when the heart is beautifully touched
by happenstance from any of the other senses.
These are the moments engraved forever in our 
personal and collective memories.
In the end, we all have been so blessed
to have a body that brings joy to the spirit.
Thus, also I breathe gratitude.
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Jones Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Your epic poem is like a beautiful praise for all God has given us! Your first place win is much deserved Andrea! Great job! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Thanks, desrie
Sangster - K Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Andrea :-) Your beautiful poem resonates with heartfelt love and gratitute. Hugs and smiles. Anne xox
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:05 PM
thanks so much, Anne.
Read Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:04 AM
Hi Andrea congratulations on your contest win.
Peck Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Dear Andrea, Your poem is so beautiful and is, I think, a lovely prayer of gratitude. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:05 PM
Thanks, Ann
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 1:39 AM
Dear andrea, this is stunning and so sincere and heartfelt how youv expressed throughout, i love your choice of words and the opening and the ending in this is truly really soulful! A heart that breathes gratitude will only receive more and be loved always, which is rare also and precious! Youv highlighted so much of what gives you jou and what keeps you going in such a descriptive manner! The flow depth and the imagery youv painted as well as diction truly makes this worthy of a first place. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:05 PM
thanks so much. I loved your inspiring theme!
Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 7:11 AM
Beautiful:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:06 PM
thanks, Joanna
Flood Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 4:22 PM
As someone who sometimes writes stupidly long poems, I feel a complete hypocrite when I baulk at other’s long poems. I very nearly clicked out of this lengthy write, Andrea, but it grabbed me and I’m glad it did. It’s a masterful write, some of which almost echoes my own deliberations (but better written of course ). Thoroughly enjoyed. Terry
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 7:47 PM
So nice of you to say. I feel the same way when I see long poems. And I love when they resonate with me
Buhagiar Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 9:40 AM
This must be the longest of your poems. Quite exhilarating. Scenes follow one after the other with beautiful imagery. I love the spirituality of your poem, too. Best for a win. Hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Oh no I have even longer ones. Haha. Thanks
Narain Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Nice poem. It touches every aspect of life. Great musing.
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:06 PM
thanks, Jay
Rolland Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 4:03 AM
very sensitive poem, and quite inspiring for the soul, enjoyed your talentuous sharing, thanks poet andrea
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:06 PM
thanks so much , Yann
Sangster - K Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 8:42 PM
A really beautiful poem Andrea. I enjoyed reading this tonight :-) Hugs Anne xox
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 3:25 PM
The title "I Breathe Enjoyment" is great! Mormon group is very interesting to read about, I like it! Wonderful poem! A favorite!
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:05 PM
Thanks, Abdullah
Hind Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:15 PM
You have a true and meaningful voice- and gratitude in your heart. It shows in this. Lovely! <3
Hind Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Also I commented on "No Mask On Knees" back to you to explain it. Check it out, :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Thanks, Paige
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 11:50 AM
- We often take all this for granted, Andrea ... gratitude for everything we can enjoy - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Thanks, dear
Read Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 11:42 AM
Wow Andrea you certainly have a gift for writing, I got enjoyment from reading your wonderful poem. Xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Thanks so much.
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