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“. . . Men are that they might have joy.” - my favorite scripture from the Book of Mormon, 2 Nephi 2:25

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I breathe enjoyment from the senses that God bestowed on me. With the gift of sight I find joy taking in scenes of sunset splendor; catching sight of random rainbows, the prettiest of which I’ve noted arching over waves of Iowa grain; gazing into the adoring eyes of my beloved; and on happening to glance anything bright or beautiful to behold. With the gift of hearing, I delight in the cries of glee of my grandchildren tearing open Christmas presents. I discover incredible information listening to videos and learning from the students I teach, whose own differing cultures and traditions enlighten me more about the world. I glean pleasure from sounds of nature: the rumble of water gushing down mountain cliffs; the rippling of rivers and ocean tides; the call of pretty birds in spring; the meow of a tiny kitten; and my mind sways in rhythm to the music on my radio. With the gift of voice, I happily sing the lyrics to my favorite tunes. With my mouth I also relish my sweetheart’s kiss. I take pleasure too in savoring spicy foods that make my taste buds pop or in tasting the cold deliciousness of ice cream on my tongue. With the gift of smell, I capture whiffs of fragrant flowers and aromatic perfumes. I know the petrichor left by rain, and I scent my mother’s bread and lasagna baking on a Sunday afternoon. With the gifts of touch and feeling, I can fling myself into waves of sea in joyful abandon, feeling the sea fresh and crisp and the sun so warm and inviting on my skin. I can feel soft sand beneath my feet while walking hand in hand with my sweetheart’s fingers stroking mine and anticipate the wonderment of his tender caresses in the night. The greatest bestowal of God on us all is the sense of feeling that does not physically touch us. This final gift, which I revel in, lies in the many moments brought about when the heart is beautifully touched by happenstance from any of the other senses. These are the moments engraved forever in our personal and collective memories. In the end, we all have been so blessed to have a body that brings joy to the spirit. Thus, also I breathe gratitude.

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Date: 11/30/2024 1:52:00 PM
Your epic poem is like a beautiful praise for all God has given us! Your first place win is much deserved Andrea! Great job! Congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/1/2024 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, desrie
Date: 11/29/2024 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Andrea :-) Your beautiful poem resonates with heartfelt love and gratitute. Hugs and smiles. Anne xox
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
thanks so much, Anne.
Date: 11/29/2024 10:04:00 AM
Hi Andrea congratulations on your contest win.
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Date: 11/29/2024 9:40:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Your poem is so beautiful and is, I think, a lovely prayer of gratitude. Congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Ann
Date: 11/29/2024 1:39:00 AM
Dear andrea, this is stunning and so sincere and heartfelt how youv expressed throughout, i love your choice of words and the opening and the ending in this is truly really soulful! A heart that breathes gratitude will only receive more and be loved always, which is rare also and precious! Youv highlighted so much of what gives you jou and what keeps you going in such a descriptive manner! The flow depth and the imagery youv painted as well as diction truly makes this worthy of a first place. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
thanks so much. I loved your inspiring theme!
Date: 11/20/2024 7:11:00 AM
Beautiful:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:06:00 PM
thanks, Joanna
Date: 11/19/2024 4:22:00 PM
As someone who sometimes writes stupidly long poems, I feel a complete hypocrite when I baulk at other’s long poems. I very nearly clicked out of this lengthy write, Andrea, but it grabbed me and I’m glad it did. It’s a masterful write, some of which almost echoes my own deliberations (but better written of course ). Thoroughly enjoyed. Terry
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2024 7:47:00 PM
So nice of you to say. I feel the same way when I see long poems. And I love when they resonate with me
Date: 11/19/2024 9:40:00 AM
This must be the longest of your poems. Quite exhilarating. Scenes follow one after the other with beautiful imagery. I love the spirituality of your poem, too. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2024 7:46:00 PM
Oh no I have even longer ones. Haha. Thanks
Date: 11/18/2024 10:10:00 AM
Nice poem. It touches every aspect of life. Great musing.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:06:00 PM
thanks, Jay
Date: 11/18/2024 4:03:00 AM
very sensitive poem, and quite inspiring for the soul, enjoyed your talentuous sharing, thanks poet andrea
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:06:00 PM
thanks so much , Yann
Date: 11/17/2024 8:42:00 PM
A really beautiful poem Andrea. I enjoyed reading this tonight :-) Hugs Anne xox
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Date: 11/17/2024 3:25:00 PM
The title "I Breathe Enjoyment" is great! Mormon group is very interesting to read about, I like it! Wonderful poem! A favorite!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2024 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Abdullah
Date: 11/17/2024 12:15:00 PM
You have a true and meaningful voice- and gratitude in your heart. It shows in this. Lovely! <3
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Paige Hind
Date: 11/17/2024 4:13:00 PM
Also I commented on "No Mask On Knees" back to you to explain it. Check it out, :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/17/2024 12:32:00 PM
Thanks, Paige
Date: 11/17/2024 11:50:00 AM
- We often take all this for granted, Andrea ... gratitude for everything we can enjoy - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/17/2024 12:32:00 PM
Thanks, dear
Date: 11/17/2024 11:42:00 AM
Wow Andrea you certainly have a gift for writing, I got enjoyment from reading your wonderful poem. Xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/17/2024 12:33:00 PM
Thanks so much.

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