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I Beseech You

Show me mercy, for I am weak a wounded bird, pity I seek unable to take flight, grounded please stop me from being hounded Listen to my pleading, I'm meek, I lay here, life surely looks bleak looking into my deaths mystique evil everywhere, surrounded show me mercy, observe inner soul not physique a living creature, I'm no freak unwillingness is unfounded non actions would be ungrounded be loving, helpful, no critique show me mercy. Composed on 15/10/2017

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Date: 10/16/2017 6:11:00 AM
Very earnest plea heard loud and clear in this poem--best for a win, Roy!
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/16/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Vijay, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 10/15/2017 12:29:00 PM
A universal plea! Lovely poetry.
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/15/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Sunlite for your very kind comment and support much appreciated. :))
Date: 10/15/2017 9:49:00 AM
Wow Roy an awesome write. Your pain is palpable. Your poem is deeply emotional, an intimate look into your dark thoughts and feeling, an intimate plea, show me mercy.., such heartfelt heartache. I love your effective title as well. Good luck in the contest!
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/15/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan, this is my first attempt at this form so really appreciate your encouraging thoughts and best wishes. :))

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