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I Beg Your Pardon

White roses grew all along the path of her Mom's garden
As a child she plucked them saying, "Oh, I beg your pardon."
Pretending they were people was a game she'd often play
remembered now as she chose flowers on her wedding day

Bouquet of white roses and forget-me-nots of pale blue.
ivy climbing on the wall. Her Mom would've liked that, too
She clipped each petaled flower from its stem in the garden
Tears fell as she whispered, "Forgive me. I beg your pardon."

White roses and forget-me-nots, she carried in a vase
on the way to church she visited her Mom's resting place
"These flowers are for you, Mom. I picked them in your garden
I'm carrying them today and I asked for their pardon."

As she walked down the aisle and wedding vows were being said
white roses bloomed with forget-me-nots,  in the garden bed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Evans Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 2:46 PM
A lovely cascade of emotion and images. You placed your own stamp on this time tested form.
Lane Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Thanks very much, Richard.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 12:08 AM
This is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes Lin! For a girl not to have her mother on her wedding day is so sad. I hope you had a beautiful Christmas with your family. Much love, Connie xxoo
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Thanks for liking this one, sad though it is. Thank you for the well wishes, too, Connie.
Lindley Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Made me think of my mom. She loved her flowers and fussed over them constantly.. Superb craftsmanship my friend.. A fav...
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Thanks a lot, Robert.
Smith Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Very heartfelt piece in your beautiful style Lin.
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Thank you very much for you sweet thoughts, Tim.
Daniel Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 7:55 AM
I love this, Lin:) wishing you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed year 2018:)
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and your well wishes, Jo. I wish you all the best.
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 3:30 PM
oh so sad a sonnet Lin I could picture the scene so so well and the pictures accompany the poem beautifully :-( hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Thanks so very much, Jan.
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