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I Awake To Darkness (part 1)

As I lay awake with my eyes closed The scent reminds me of a passionate rose I rise to my feet and begin to walk The spirits in my room begin to talk Listening closely to what they all say I collapse to my knees and start to pray They taunt and torture my mind and spirit Tears of blood I cry and I fear it How do I survive, how do I live Please dear spirits, please forgive I don't know what to do I don't know where to go Fear is what I have for the future unknown As I stand back up and open my eyes The world around me is filled with lies Demon and Angel blood is coarsing through my viens My heart is racing as I teleport to the plains A silent and dead field lies in front of me In the center a castle as old as can be I walk slowly towards the cold The castles structure was stable and bold As I open the door a chill runs down my spine Darkness and Depression is all that I can find I clear the building with one quick sweep Growing tired I collapse and I fall asleep...

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Date: 2/24/2010 9:35:00 AM
Interesting story. I shall continue to read and comment at the end. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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