I Await..... (Part 4) Compition

I await 
My nerves are intoxicated
A meet of the intrigued
A seed has been planted
We now see 
Is this real between you and me 
I await 
Is my heart at stake
Oh am I the breakable one
A meeting of two
Only the second time
So why do I feeling so alive 
I await
My body is like a chamber of anxious energy
An urge a will a force a pull so strong
Lover of my mind 
I await
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Fraser Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 1:53 AM
The two in mix as they absorb their souls, their journey well on as they enjoy their goals >> James
Cobb Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:02 PM
very good write. i enjoyed it, in the same way that i am enjoying this challenge. and you are definitely making it a challenge. hope that you are ready for round five. posting it now.
Mehta Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:44 AM
A nice poem on love and its yearning
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