I Await

The path taken, stunning and sublime rivers rushed, such a magical ride the sun shone, the bluebird danced feelings felt, life enhanced secrets floating through the innocence, nothing slipped on by but still I am back amid the wilderness not noticing what's around grey stealing recollection darkness gone unbound stretched across the horizon silent letters pierce my chest washed up an endless sentence I await
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Downing  Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Yeah I fave this! So incredibly AMAZING!
Hopper Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 12:14 PM
This is an incredible poem! I LOVE it
Wolf Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 10:38 AM
This one is a little gem, Tim! Wonderful words, my friend. Deep and mysterious.
Thomas Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 7:46 PM
This is so very beautiful; I feel that word is not strong enough here but I use it for all it means.
Vaso Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 3:10 PM
ah, waiting for love......... seems to take forever, great write!
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