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Jack in the box

I asked Jack, 'How can you stand to live in that box'


I asked Jack, "How can you stand to live in that box?
Whiskey on the rocks?”
He said, "Nah, it's much more mundane.
I simply turn off my brain; then, turn it back on again,
when someone else wants me to entertain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Leach Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:10 PM
This is hilarious on the surface, but the last line hit different. Poor Jack--just flipping his switch on and off for whoever walks by. Clever and quietly sad. I really felt that.
Jansen Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Thanks, Alesia. Your comment means a lot. :-)
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