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I am your Father





I am your father, the Lord in heaven.
Nothing that you say or do, gets by me!
Do not hurt others, seven times seven.

I am the one who gave you a golden soul.
So never say, I have no Father!
You came from two parents, that was my goal.

Pen only poetry that makes me so proud.
Nothing crude, nor crass, nor brazen or loud!
Just great poetry, that makes me proud

                   1/20/2024

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Devi Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Good poetry,love of the God Nice
Romios Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 3:07 PM
Good Day.. Soiban, how sweet of you to comment. Humans think they made the world? I don’t think so., Honored by your visut. Love,Pangie xx
Messina Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Very nice, Pangie. I LMAO at your comment to Andrea. I hear you on that...even with my glasses I squint (lol). Hey if you get a chance check out the poem on my site that my brother wrote...he doesn't write poetry all that much but when he does it's very good. I think you will like this poem titled "President Trump" Hugs.. Charlie
Romios Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Greetings, dear friend from long ago, I get a special lump in my heart. When I meet friends from so long ago, We have not thrown each other in the garbage can., so to speak. ))I wonder If God feels the same way ehen we talk to Him? There are friends here that still my friends I am close to them.I email, but we have an understanding that neither of us must read each other‘s poetry. Thanks. I think that gives us freedom. You’re very down to earth you know that.?Oh, I think I have more spelling errors than the stars in heaven))), I failed my driving test, of course. But as th I wrote in one poem, I can see young men very well))Not the letters on the board though. It’s safer for me and everyone if I don’t drive..300 illegals were arrested today, “wow “i will read your poem re,President Trump, now. Three hearts from Pangie.xoxo….
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 1:21 PM
a sweet one, Pangie. Line five has a small typo!
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Thank you for coming by and the correction. I am humble enough to take corrections, my vision is going! So you find typos everywhere. I fins poems labeled under wrong poem tpres constantly Especially Monokus, Haikus and Senryus. But have no clues theyare not a bright idea with an image above it. Roflmao.)) Lolce, Pangie
Singh Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Great.Nice to share.
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:41 PM
Hii Akhim.i sent you a soupmail today. I was not online for a day.. i do try to comment to all. Today is my day off. Trouble with loony Americans who think they are above the law….this has been a growing problen for the past four years. Thank you. Pangie xoxo
Eagle Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 5:41 PM
How wonderful to create a poem for our fathers. Just so meaningful and creative.
Romios Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Sorry I am late Elena. First the cold, then all the cenrating. Hope all humann beings at least bow their heads to their God. Gumitiy seems to be missing more and more. As we think we are gods! We are nort. Lony be yours, xoxp pangie
Fisher Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:25 PM
I enjoyed your uplifting poem today, Pangie. We keep trying with the best poetry that flows through us.
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 5:14 PM
I agree, I even wonder after I wrote this poem I was about to take it down. I thought it’s not good enough.. I go through that with every poem..My daughter has to listen to my groaning about what a terrible poet I am, and she’s tired of it.))) Love, Pangie xoxo. I took a few days off. Because I had a bad cold. and finally, I feel better.
Hind Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Very uplifting - :)
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 5:15 PM
Than kyou Miss Paige! I have no idea what inspired this poem sometimes I know most of the times I don’t know.. I hope you have a great Sunday. Love ve Pangie xoxo
Read Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Hi Pangie, I will do my best to follow your example, nothing crude or rude, hopefully I will not hurt anyone. xx
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Hi John. It was a spiritual message. Great poets do not write trash . There is plenty humor in the world, and, I want to add, this is only my opinon. With a Christan upbringing this really affected me.. we have great limerick writers here. Love, Pangie xx
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