I Am Wind

I am Wind

Blowing all Around

Whispering through the Leaves

Else I make no Sound

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 9:05:00 AM

thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 9:05:00 AM

John, once again, thanks for the reply on my comment

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/30/2014 7:26:00 AM

What a wonderful description about the wind! Congratulations Beharry!

John Beharry
Date: 9/1/2014 10:04:00 AM

Thanks, Teddy! Have a nice day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:02:00 PM

VERY nice!! Congrats.

John Beharry
Date: 9/1/2014 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I am glad you enjoyed it. Have a lovely day!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:33:00 AM

Short and sweet personification of the wind, john. congrats

John Beharry
Date: 9/1/2014 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Dr Ram! Always nice to hear from you. Have a good day!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2014 5:31:00 AM

Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

John Beharry
Date: 9/1/2014 10:01:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. All the best to you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:45:00 PM

Hi John, it's nice to be the first to comemnt on this poem. LOL, I sure, can't imagine the wind with no sound, then what would it be. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

John Beharry
Date: 9/1/2014 10:12:00 AM

I should have said: to date, it has had over 2500 views. When I checked again, it was 2514 views. Thanks again, Linda!

John Beharry
Date: 9/1/2014 9:59:00 AM

Thank you very much for placement of this poem in your contest. Something about it must be very interesting to others. To date, it has had 2501 views. I did a quartet of these personification poems . Others are "I am Rain", "I am Sun", "I am Moon". All have received well over 1000 views. Continue your good work! Best wishes to you!

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