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I Am True Blue

I am true blue Loyal to you When your heart cries out in sorrow I will shelter you from your fears keep your eyes from spilling their tears I will steadfastly staunch their flow I will shelter you from your fears shield you from and an evil foe raise your spirits when they are low keep your eyes from spilling their tears I am true blue I will shelter you from your fears until your smile begins to glow keep your eyes from spilling their tears Loyal to you Loyal to you I am true blue December 7, 2021 Meditative Ballad Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet Syllables verified on HowManySyllables Rhyming verified on RhymeZone

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Mark Koplin

Date: 12/8/2021 1:44:00 PM

“When your heart cries out in sorrow I will shelter you from your fears“ I love this! Well done my friend!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2021 2:30:00 PM

Merci beaucoup, Mark.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/8/2021 8:44:00 AM

This is more than enough for anyone to hope for " I will shelter you from your fears shield you from and an evil foe raise your spirits when they are low"

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2021 2:30:00 PM

What a friend we'd have in such a person. I'm glad you've commented on another of my writes. Thanks, Caren.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2021 8:40:00 AM

Lovely write Lin, truly comforting knowing there is someone loyal out there, the world is so cold!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2021 9:46:00 AM

Yes, it is, John. People only care about themselves and have a 'what's in it for me' attitude. Thank you for adding your insight.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/7/2021 7:31:00 AM

This was a "Hero" poem to me. The protector and comforter. Enjoyed the read, Lin. Blessings ~ Smiles Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2021 9:45:00 AM

I wasn't sure if my purpose came through since it's a new form for a contest, but I'm sure you got my point. Thank you, Bill.