I Am the Wind

 
I am the wind that came roaring from the cold north today there are days when I am a gentle breeze that caresses softly but not today- today I am angry ... I whip around the trees setting them in motion making them sway back and forth and I love to make branches tremble and flutter twirling and swirling in a whirlwind dance as I breathe in their tangled swaying limbs my tempest and see how I make the grass move like ocean waves rolling and garden flowers bend and struggle to stay upright oh, have no fear they are stronger than you think I like to take things and to throw them over the horizon oh, can you hear my howling bellow on your shaking windows I twist and turn, zigzag and weave ... now, I am breathless and gasping as I meander along a stream- oh, I like to entwine with nature _________________ May 23, 2021 Poetry/Personification/I am the Wind Copyright Protected, ID 05-1357-596-23 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Personification 150 sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, Judged 06/26/2021 First Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1057) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/22/2022 First Place
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Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 12:01 PM
I have read your work that is on the winners' list and find it worthy of the placement. Congrats..Sara
La France Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Sara, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~
Merryman Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Excellent personification with vivid imagery! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Constance! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~
Alex Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 7:07 AM
"I twist and turn, zigzag and weave" - Great! Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~
Goff Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Congrats Constance! for me, the beauty of this poem, you entwine, the last line...brings your souls relationship with the natural world to light, I love that!
La France Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 10:25 AM
James, thanks for the congrats and compliment, love ~
Allison Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Wonderful personification Constance. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Roper Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Beautiful poem with great imagery, Constance. You made me feel the strong emotion and movement of the wind. Congratulations on your win in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Eve, thank you for the comment, compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Lawless Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Oh the billowing braggadocio of a once gentle breeze.....masterfully done Constance.
La France Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 1:02 PM
John, thank you so much for the comment and the compliment, peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. Now I know what the wind feels like. Oh to be the wind. Have a blessed day with your win...................
La France Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Pula, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, we have a love of wind in my city so I know exactly what wind feels like, love and serenity _Constance
Brul Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 7:04 AM
SO beautifully rendered...Congratulations on your first place win!!
La France Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:30 AM
JCB, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, love _Constance
Daniel Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Wonderful, Constance, congratulations:)
La France Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Jo, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, love _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Wonderful wind...love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Gina, thanks so much for the compliment, love _Constance
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