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I Am the Comissionare

I'm coming for you bitches hitting you with my poetry sending you to the mental hospital needing brain stitches. Ima make you fall apart you thought I was finished honey I didn't even start. You might be pretty but your not smart. Don't be sleeping on me , cause when I blow up ill have your man on my Instagram silently creeping . This is reality no your not dreaming . You think I'm ghost I'm just quietly scheming . But check it start peeping you thought I wouldn't make it I get 100 likes fully clothed you get 25 likes being completely naked. When they say my name you get this eerie feeling and you can't shake it . I'm always on your mental . It's eating you inside it's detrimental . Your my guinea pig it's experimental . I know I'm doing good when I see you mad it's so sad your words are bad and your hooks are kind of like the worst sex I've ever had. Even your man thinks your whack I know this cause he tells me you found out and had a heart attack . But chill out I don't need him to bad you got traded for a girl who looks like she just came out of maxim. Karmas a ***** and she's playing on my side . You can drop the mic exit stage left for your career has died. It's funny cause you never even dropped you were to underdeveloped . My Facebook you stalked my twitter you followed your like a kiddie pool super shallow . I hope you say back and took notes this is probably the best poem I've ever wrote . If you need to press rewind on the remote . Don't go back up selling coke if you get caught its murder she wrote I think I'm finally done dissing you becoming one of my poems is your worst nightmare you'll be a citizen while I am the comissionaire .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/16/2016 12:51:00 AM
wow, now that's a slam... Love lINDA
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:57:00 AM
Thanks :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:14:00 AM
"I get 100 likes fully clothed". HA! That's how it should be. Tasteful, yet fierce, like this writing! Reppin' hard on this...nice. Let the power flow...
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Jennifer Cardona
Date: 9/12/2013 11:01:00 AM
Thanks :)))

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