I Am the Comissionare

I'm coming for you bitches 
hitting you with my poetry 
sending you to the mental 
hospital needing brain stitches. 
Ima make you fall apart you 
thought I was finished honey I 
didn't even start.  You might be 
pretty but your not smart.  
Don't be sleeping on me , cause 
when I blow up ill have your 
man on my Instagram silently 
creeping . This is reality no 
your not dreaming . You think 
I'm ghost I'm just quietly 
scheming . But check it start 
peeping you thought I wouldn't 
make it I get 100 likes fully 
clothed you get 25 likes being 
completely naked. When they 
say my name you get this eerie 
feeling and you can't shake it . 
I'm always on your mental . It's 
eating you inside it's 
detrimental . Your my guinea 
pig it's experimental . I know 
I'm doing good when I see you 
mad it's so sad your words are 
bad and your hooks are kind of 
like the worst sex I've ever 
had. Even your man thinks 
your whack I know this cause 
he tells me you found out and 
had a heart attack . But chill 
out I don't need him to bad you 
got traded for a girl who looks 
like she just came out of 
maxim. Karmas a ***** and 
she's playing on my side . You 
can drop the mic exit stage left 
for your career has died. It's 
funny cause you never even 
dropped you were to 
underdeveloped . My Facebook 
you stalked my twitter you 
followed your like a kiddie pool 
super shallow . I hope you say 
back and took notes this is 
probably the best poem I've 
ever wrote . If you need to 
press rewind on the remote . 
Don't go back up selling coke if 
you get caught its murder she 
wrote I think I'm finally done 
dissing you becoming one of 
my poems is your worst 
nightmare you'll be a citizen 
while I am the comissionaire .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 16, 2016 at 12:51 AM
wow, now that's a slam... Love lINDA
Cardona Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Thanks :)
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:14 AM
"I get 100 likes fully clothed". HA! That's how it should be. Tasteful, yet fierce, like this writing! Reppin' hard on this...nice. Let the power flow...
Cardona Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Thanks :)))
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