I Am the Comissionare

I'm coming for you bitches 
hitting you with my poetry 
sending you to the mental 
hospital needing brain stitches. 
Ima make you fall apart you 
thought I was finished honey I 
didn't even start.  You might be 
pretty but your not smart.  
Don't be sleeping on me , cause 
when I blow up ill have your 
man on my Instagram silently 
creeping . This is reality no 
your not dreaming . You think 
I'm ghost I'm just quietly 
scheming . But check it start 
peeping you thought I wouldn't 
make it I get 100 likes fully 
clothed you get 25 likes being 
completely naked. When they 
say my name you get this eerie 
feeling and you can't shake it . 
I'm always on your mental . It's 
eating you inside it's 
detrimental . Your my guinea 
pig it's experimental . I know 
I'm doing good when I see you 
mad it's so sad your words are 
bad and your hooks are kind of 
like the worst sex I've ever 
had. Even your man thinks 
your whack I know this cause 
he tells me you found out and 
had a heart attack . But chill 
out I don't need him to bad you 
got traded for a girl who looks 
like she just came out of 
maxim. Karmas a ***** and 
she's playing on my side . You 
can drop the mic exit stage left 
for your career has died. It's 
funny cause you never even 
dropped you were to 
underdeveloped . My Facebook 
you stalked my twitter you 
followed your like a kiddie pool 
super shallow . I hope you say 
back and took notes this is 
probably the best poem I've 
ever wrote . If you need to 
press rewind on the remote . 
Don't go back up selling coke if 
you get caught its murder she 
wrote I think I'm finally done 
dissing you becoming one of 
my poems is your worst 
nightmare you'll be a citizen 
while I am the comissionaire .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/16/2016 12:51:00 AM
wow, now that's a slam... Love lINDA
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:57:00 AM
Thanks :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:14:00 AM
"I get 100 likes fully clothed". HA! That's how it should be. Tasteful, yet fierce, like this writing! Reppin' hard on this...nice. Let the power flow...
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Jennifer Cardona
Date: 9/12/2013 11:01:00 AM
Thanks :)))
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