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I Am Still Reliving That Drive

I’m still reliving that drive 
‘What are you thinking about over there?’
You deserve the world, so do I
there are stars in your eyes

‘What are you thinking about over there?’
Let this car take us the wrong way 
there are stars in your eyes 
again, and again in my mind

Let this car take us the wrong way
You deserve the world, so do I
again and again in my mind,
I’m still reliving that drive.

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/9/2019 12:08:00 AM

Melani, I like this drive. I think back on a time when the drive went wrong, and remember it fondly. -Richard

Melani Udaeta
Date: 10/9/2019 12:29:00 AM

Indeed! :)