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I am usually a thoughtful, caring, but calmly serious person...Trying to be a silly here?!

beware Picasso 
my home is on great statues
expressing myself

Edward J. Ebbs - 5/16/15
Written for: PICTURE YOURSELF AS A BIRD - Poetry Contest, just for laughs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/10/2016 9:33:00 PM
very funny, check out my Haiku, "Bombs Away". I had never considered the bird expressing itself in this manner. I like the break you created between the first and second line.
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Date: 5/27/2015 9:02:00 PM
Hi Ed.. this was such a fun and interesting contest. Congrats on you're winning haiku write, and forgive me if I begin to think of you as a pigeon!
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:55:00 PM
There are worse things in life to be compared to...Thanks Lyric
Date: 5/26/2015 12:42:00 PM
Hi Ed, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your very witty Haiku about the pigeon! Sandra
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:58:00 PM
Well, I hope your 10 days off were fun filled :) ~ Thank you :)
Date: 5/25/2015 10:59:00 PM
Whether you're being serious or humorous its always good to express yourself!... Congrats on the win, Ed! This poem is great fun :)
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:57:00 PM
LOL, thanks Kelly :)
Date: 5/24/2015 8:22:00 PM
Cute way of doing the contest, Ed. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thank you Robin Kim :)
Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Ed, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:35:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Linda :)
Date: 5/24/2015 10:29:00 AM
haha...comedy in poetry by the little birdie... great wit, Ed. A 7 and congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Kim, the Eagle :)
Date: 5/24/2015 6:15:00 AM
good laugh, I needed that at the end of this extra night shift I am working, thanks.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Shirley, both happy and sad here...sad you were working an extra night shift for any reason, but happy for your laugh!
Date: 5/24/2015 4:30:00 AM
I loved this the first time I read it Ed - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thank you muchly Jan :)
Date: 5/23/2015 11:16:00 PM
WOW...lol,, love this
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thanks SKAT!
Date: 5/23/2015 8:46:00 PM
Not sure how Haiku it is but it sure tickled my funny bone, Ed. Clever little poem!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thank You Andrea :)
Date: 5/23/2015 8:11:00 AM
Ed, your little pigeon poem is delightful, it made me smile, a perfect 7, here in my city of Ottawa, Ontario, Canada we have a lot of pigeons and a lot of statues, the downtown area is full of pigeons, God painted them all in lovely colors and I just love that cooing song, thanks for visiting my poem, a day in my life . . .
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Date: 5/23/2015 10:33:00 AM
Actually we have more doves in this area of Oregon than pigeons. They seem to have come from out of know where recently. Their sounds...http://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Eurasian_Collared-Dove/sounds ~ Thank you for sharing :)
Date: 5/21/2015 7:34:00 PM
LOL, I so love this. The perfect artist. LOL, they are! SKAT
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Date: 5/21/2015 9:18:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 5/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
Ed.. Oh, the last line brings it home for me.. Love it!
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Date: 5/18/2015 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Lyric :)
Date: 5/17/2015 6:46:00 AM
love your clever take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2015 10:04:00 AM
LOL, thanks Jan, smiles for you :)