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beware Picasso my home is on great statues expressing myself Edward J. Ebbs - 5/16/15 Written for: PICTURE YOURSELF AS A BIRD - Poetry Contest, just for laughs

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Ijm Seven

Date: 1/10/2016 9:33:00 PM

very funny, check out my Haiku, "Bombs Away". I had never considered the bird expressing itself in this manner. I like the break you created between the first and second line.

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/26/2015 12:42:00 PM

Hi Ed, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your very witty Haiku about the pigeon! Sandra

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/26/2015 1:58:00 PM

Well, I hope your 10 days off were fun filled :) ~ Thank you :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/25/2015 10:59:00 PM

Whether you're being serious or humorous its always good to express yourself!... Congrats on the win, Ed! This poem is great fun :)

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/26/2015 1:57:00 PM

LOL, thanks Kelly :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/24/2015 8:22:00 PM

Cute way of doing the contest, Ed. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Robin Kim :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM

Ed, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 10:35:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Linda :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/24/2015 10:29:00 AM

haha...comedy in poetry by the little birdie... great wit, Ed. A 7 and congratulations!

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Kim, the Eagle :)

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 5/24/2015 6:15:00 AM

good laugh, I needed that at the end of this extra night shift I am working, thanks.

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Shirley, both happy and sad here...sad you were working an extra night shift for any reason, but happy for your laugh!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2015 4:30:00 AM

I loved this the first time I read it Ed - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 7:11:00 AM

Thank you muchly Jan :)

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:16:00 PM

WOW...lol,, love this

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 7:11:00 AM

Thanks SKAT!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2015 8:46:00 PM

Not sure how Haiku it is but it sure tickled my funny bone, Ed. Clever little poem!!! Congratulations.

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/24/2015 7:10:00 AM

Thank You Andrea :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/23/2015 8:11:00 AM

Ed, your little pigeon poem is delightful, it made me smile, a perfect 7, here in my city of Ottawa, Ontario, Canada we have a lot of pigeons and a lot of statues, the downtown area is full of pigeons, God painted them all in lovely colors and I just love that cooing song, thanks for visiting my poem, a day in my life . . .

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/23/2015 10:33:00 AM

Actually we have more doves in this area of Oregon than pigeons. They seem to have come from out of know where recently. Their sounds...http://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Eurasian_Collared-Dove/sounds ~ Thank you for sharing :)

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2015 7:34:00 PM

LOL, I so love this. The perfect artist. LOL, they are! SKAT

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/21/2015 9:18:00 PM

Thanks Skat!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2015 6:46:00 AM

love your clever take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/17/2015 10:04:00 AM

LOL, thanks Jan, smiles for you :)