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I Am Numb

Pinch me and I will not feel a thing Since losing you all feelings gone What did I do, ....to merit your hurtful sting, ....i drown in life's fast river. Because I am heartbroken I am numb
Penned 20/04/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/7/2017 4:48:00 PM
You did a really good job with your nonet, Seren. Congrats on the winner list.
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Date: 5/6/2017 9:14:00 AM
Numb with pain from a broken heart! Very expressive, Seren. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/5/2017 3:29:00 PM
Seren congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
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Date: 5/5/2017 4:44:00 AM
Coming back with congratulations Seren :)
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Date: 4/29/2017 5:17:00 AM
I hope Seren this is fictional. You know I love you. Excellent write, mint, a fav. Your friend always, armand.
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Date: 4/22/2017 3:44:00 AM
Aww, what a great but painful poem, Seren... But I smile at you and Tim :)
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Date: 4/20/2017 7:34:00 PM
such deep sad imagery Seren I can imagine some folks really can relate to your lines after the break up of a relationship:-) I'm thankful I never have felt this low:-) hugs jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/29/2017 5:15:00 AM
That's because your melons keep you afloat. Keep that garden healthy. Love you, armand.
Date: 4/20/2017 7:19:00 PM
Oh my after reading Tim's comment, I think I knee a drink or two laddy. Nice poem!
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Date: 4/20/2017 9:10:00 AM
Seren, don't listen to Tim. That would be a terrible way to test your numbness. LOL Nice write.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/29/2017 5:11:00 AM
I tried the same thing a little higher. It was nuts.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/20/2017 12:17:00 PM
I was joking...I'm in the knee club as well.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/20/2017 9:35:00 AM
Oh my Lin he is brutal.....Seren
Date: 4/20/2017 8:34:00 AM
I know the feeling...Just crack your knee and you will feel something
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/29/2017 5:13:00 AM
Ok, so where is Casarah's comment. If she were here this would be an official Three musketeer reunion with Seren as the queen of france.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2017 7:32:00 PM
Knee him in the nuts Seren he will soon be numb lol!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/20/2017 9:35:00 AM
haha Tim your cruel ...Seren

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