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I Am Numb

Pinch me and I will not feel a thing
Since losing you all feelings gone
What did I do, ....to merit
your hurtful sting, ....i drown
in life's fast river.
Because I am
heartbroken
I am
numb


Penned 20/04/2017

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/7/2017 4:48:00 PM You did a really good job with your nonet, Seren. Congrats on the winner list. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/6/2017 9:14:00 AM Numb with pain from a broken heart! Very expressive, Seren. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/5/2017 3:29:00 PM Seren congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 5/5/2017 4:44:00 AM Coming back with congratulations Seren :) Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/29/2017 5:17:00 AM I hope Seren this is fictional. You know I love you. Excellent write, mint, a fav. Your friend always, armand. Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 4/22/2017 3:44:00 AM Aww, what a great but painful poem, Seren... But I smile at you and Tim :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 7:34:00 PM such deep sad imagery Seren I can imagine some folks really can relate to your lines after the break up of a relationship:-) I'm thankful I never have felt this low:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/29/2017 5:15:00 AM That's because your melons keep you afloat. Keep that garden healthy. Love you, armand.

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/20/2017 7:19:00 PM Oh my after reading Tim's comment, I think I knee a drink or two laddy. Nice poem! Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 4/20/2017 9:10:00 AM Seren, don't listen to Tim. That would be a terrible way to test your numbness. LOL Nice write. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/29/2017 5:11:00 AM I tried the same thing a little higher. It was nuts. Tim Smith Date: 4/20/2017 12:17:00 PM I was joking...I'm in the knee club as well. Seren Roberts Date: 4/20/2017 9:35:00 AM Oh my Lin he is brutal.....Seren

Tim Smith Date: 4/20/2017 8:34:00 AM I know the feeling...Just crack your knee and you will feel something Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/29/2017 5:13:00 AM Ok, so where is Casarah's comment. If she were here this would be an official Three musketeer reunion with Seren as the queen of france. Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 7:32:00 PM Knee him in the nuts Seren he will soon be numb lol!:-) hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts Date: 4/20/2017 9:35:00 AM haha Tim your cruel ...Seren