Seren Roberts Poet Nonet

I Am Numb

Pinch me and I will not feel a thing
Since losing you all feelings gone
What did I do, ....to merit
your hurtful sting, ....i drown
in life's fast river.
Because I am
heartbroken
I am
numb


Penned 20/04/2017

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Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2017 at 4:48 PM You did a really good job with your nonet, Seren. Congrats on the winner list.

Paul Callus May 6, 2017 at 9:14 AM Numb with pain from a broken heart! Very expressive, Seren. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Constance La France May 5, 2017 at 3:29 PM Seren congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem

Darren White May 5, 2017 at 4:44 AM Coming back with congratulations Seren :)

Maurice Yvonne April 29, 2017 at 5:17 AM I hope Seren this is fictional. You know I love you. Excellent write, mint, a fav. Your friend always, armand.

Darren White April 22, 2017 at 3:44 AM Aww, what a great but painful poem, Seren... But I smile at you and Tim :)

Jan Allison April 20, 2017 at 7:34 PM such deep sad imagery Seren I can imagine some folks really can relate to your lines after the break up of a relationship:-) I'm thankful I never have felt this low:-) hugs jan xx Maurice Yvonne April 29, 2017 at 5:15 AM That's because your melons keep you afloat. Keep that garden healthy. Love you, armand.

Arthur Vaso April 20, 2017 at 7:19 PM Oh my after reading Tim's comment, I think I knee a drink or two laddy. Nice poem!

Lin Lane April 20, 2017 at 9:10 AM Seren, don't listen to Tim. That would be a terrible way to test your numbness. LOL Nice write. Maurice Yvonne April 29, 2017 at 5:11 AM I tried the same thing a little higher. It was nuts. Tim Smith April 20, 2017 at 12:17 PM I was joking...I'm in the knee club as well. Seren Roberts April 20, 2017 at 9:35 AM Oh my Lin he is brutal.....Seren

Tim Smith April 20, 2017 at 8:34 AM I know the feeling...Just crack your knee and you will feel something Maurice Yvonne April 29, 2017 at 5:13 AM Ok, so where is Casarah's comment. If she were here this would be an official Three musketeer reunion with Seren as the queen of france. Jan Allison April 20, 2017 at 7:32 PM Knee him in the nuts Seren he will soon be numb lol!:-) hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts April 20, 2017 at 9:35 AM haha Tim your cruel ...Seren