Premiere Contest WinnerI Am Nothing But the Color Red

My veins bleed of Crimson defeat-
The way they flow with such ease and comfort
      brings me to my remorseful knees…
I sleep with Ruby dreams and hope with
Magenta skies and no matter the
season or reason I am forever caught in
            Scarlet secrets.

Tormented by the loss of heartfelt goodbyes
I linger into the hues I longed to hold as
a child. 
      A Sangria sunset always warmed my chill-
the way the sky set a scenery of satisfaction 
overflowing with Blushed memories.
Freedom resides in the comfort of 
                    loving arms. 
My arms were born to hold only regret,
as my blood races and my body aches for
something other than Rouge temptation. 
        I wear shades of lipstick that 
shatter my dignity...  

                              I am nothing but a  
                              stalking mourner full 
                              of yesterday’s
                              atonement-
                              lost in a tragic moment. 

Raspberries and Strawberries-
Cherries grown in my back yard.
        They all share the color I have tried to
run from since I was burned by the Fire
                    of regret. 

A Mahogany brick crumbled my soul,
          as I thirsted for a glass of Merlot-
A fever of Garnet ran high in my head,
                  for I am nothing but the color of Red.


Red Contest
May 29, 2017
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Cozart Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 11:13 AM
I'm re-reading this for the nth time. It is so gorgeous!
Poteet Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 6:56 AM
I read your thoughts from the get-go, marvelous response to the color RED prompt...the sangria and merlot connections reveal your pleasure well. My favorite line: "I sleep with Ruby dreams..." Congrats, Laura Loo.
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 4:03 AM
- A wonderful winning poems, Laura - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:20 PM
I thought you'd probably win. well-deserved!
Roper Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura ~*
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 10:13 AM
I agree absolutely. You are indeed the color red! You should be the poster girl for the color red. Great job Laura. Congrats and blessings my friend.
Daniel Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 10:04 AM
This is beyond beautiful, Laura:) sad in its crimson beauty:( congratulations on your trophy win:)
Lawless Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Laura, I think that the color RED is blushing.....fantastic color, imagery, passion, poetry......
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 4:40 AM
This is outstanding luloo! I see why it is a first place trophy winner! Congratulations! 7 ; )
Wolf Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Congrats on this awesome win, Laura!
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 7:48 PM
thank you White Wolf :)
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 4:37 PM
Beautifully written, filled with somber imagery and emotions in reds, Luloo. Congratulations on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:09 PM
many thanks sweet Sandra :)
Leiser Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Wow, beautifully descriptive poem on the color red, packed with imagery and emotions! Congrats on your top win, Laura Loo. :)
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:09 PM
many thanks lovely Laura :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 3:31 PM
This poem is SUPERB--emotional, full of imagery--powerful! Congrats on your well-deserved top win, Luloo! Janice
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:09 PM
thank you lovely Janice :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 2:32 PM
wow, moments weaving a sense of poignancy...pensive, but beautiful all the way, loo.. huggs
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:08 PM
thank you sweet Nette :)
Cozart Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 11:47 AM
This is amazingly beautiful! I felt myself being lifted up by "Sangria Sunset" and "Blushed Memories", "Rouge Temptation" and "Garnet Fever". I imagine you'd win the whole contest with this poem. FAVE.
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:08 PM
thank you Dale :)
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