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I Am Not Staring

No darling, I am not staring at her curvy hips Trust me, I am not looking at her luscious lips No, I am not beckoned by her big brown breasts Neither am I lusting for her perfect long legs Her sleeveless, bare-back blouse is nothing Just like her six foot frame that’s fit for modeling I didn’t even notice the short skirt she is wearing Not even her cleavage, shiny bracelet or earring Who cares if she has spotless, silky-smooth skin Or that she has a pointed, picture-perfect chin Baby you better believe me because it is true You thought I was staring but I was thinking of you

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 2:04:00 PM

I like your sense of humor and attention to all the details.

John Pen
Date: 5/5/2014 1:50:00 AM

Thanks Richard

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/29/2014 8:45:00 AM

Haha...This is a good one. I love how you capture the readers attention in the beginning, making them eager to read onward. This is truly an awesome write. Thanks for the visit that led me here.

John Pen
Date: 5/2/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thanks

Allan Kazembe

Date: 4/25/2014 2:21:00 AM

i can hear your disturbance in the first two stanzas with the near rhymes as you labor to explain...but thanks you have perfected it in the last stanza which emphasizes your assurance to your lovebird... good one

John Pen
Date: 4/25/2014 2:50:00 AM

Great to hear from a "homeboy". Thanks Allan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/24/2014 11:24:00 AM

That's sweet but we'll be careful with the eyes sometimes word spills out but the eyes can never deny:D hahaha i like the descriptions..:D, olive eloisa dropping by with a smile :)

John Pen
Date: 4/25/2014 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Olive