John Pen Poet Free verse

I Am Not Staring

No darling, I am not staring at her curvy hips
Trust me, I am not looking at her luscious lips
No, I am not beckoned by her big brown breasts
Neither am I lusting for her perfect long legs


Her sleeveless, bare-back blouse is nothing
Just like her six foot frame that’s fit for modeling
I didn’t even notice the short skirt she is wearing
Not even her cleavage, shiny bracelet or earring


Who cares if she has spotless, silky-smooth skin
Or that she has a pointed, picture-perfect chin
Baby you better believe me because it is true
You thought I was staring but I was thinking of you

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Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2014 at 2:04 PM I like your sense of humor and attention to all the details. John Pen May 5, 2014 at 1:50 AM Thanks Richard

Pace Ink-U-Script April 29, 2014 at 8:45 AM Haha...This is a good one. I love how you capture the readers attention in the beginning, making them eager to read onward. This is truly an awesome write. Thanks for the visit that led me here. John Pen May 2, 2014 at 7:11 AM Thanks

Allan Kazembe April 25, 2014 at 2:21 AM i can hear your disturbance in the first two stanzas with the near rhymes as you labor to explain...but thanks you have perfected it in the last stanza which emphasizes your assurance to your lovebird... good one John Pen April 25, 2014 at 2:50 AM Great to hear from a "homeboy". Thanks Allan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 11:24 AM That's sweet but we'll be careful with the eyes sometimes word spills out but the eyes can never deny:D hahaha i like the descriptions..:D, olive eloisa dropping by with a smile :) John Pen April 25, 2014 at 2:49 AM Thanks Olive