I Am, No More

Strong emotion emit from this piece. "As pieces of me fall upon this lonely earth"...Is there anyone out there to help me? thats the question i always ask myself. Thank you for sharing this piece.

I get the feeling that this is about some form of abuse but not sure. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

I feel sad tears falling in this piece. I hope all is well. God Bless Phyl

A deft cinematics of poetic physics ... good, excellently good: I stand, barely as pieces of me fall ... high praises for this.

I stand. barley As pieces of me Fall...WOW Mr. D you are so eloquent and marvelous with your words...so discriptive and full of zeal! So vulnerable and harsh...WOW! Bravo my poet friend. Well done. You have many dignities I am certain. A professor and father and husband. Michael,you're seen/read by strangers like me each day! Luckily you allow us to ...read into your heartmind, Learning with your writing about pain,hurt,love,and loyalties lost,That takes courage! to you...I raise my glass~!

This is so sad yet written so beautifully. The emotion is touchable in this poingiant piece. Excellent poetry, Michael! Love, Robin

Michael this is very sad and down for you but well described I hope you have a better tomorrow! Laura :)

This is such an echoing poem - i can almost hear your tears dropping on the floor here in sadness. this is different for you - the form, It's a new side to you, M, i likie. :) Love, Kristin

how did I miss this one-- this was great--pieces of me fall upon this lonely earth-- Just amazing write--again you are on a theme my friend :)