I Am Missing Something

ice cold water
the key to Mommy’s flakiest pie crust
I know this
yet there must be something else I am missing

My crust is hard and tough
not tasty or flaky

Is it possible there must also
be an appreciation or love
for baking?

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Date: 10/31/2019 11:03:00 AM
Kissing the dough, praying over it and the timing must be right! So my husband made roladin (only once) for a Christmas crowd, many years after we were married as his dear departed mother, in his ear, whispered what he would likely have forgot...true story.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 12:07:00 PM
I am a big believer is listening to the whispers of those who loved us on this plane and still love us in the next. I imagine it was quite tasty!
Date: 10/31/2019 10:07:00 AM
Happy Halloween Caren! Today the dead find forgiveness for the living. And we must follow suit and wipe the slate to grey. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 12:08:00 PM
I am wildly wiping the slate of this past month away into a dustpan ready to begin anew.
Date: 10/31/2019 9:05:00 AM
All mom in the world knows that how to make a good crust and each and all miss if it is not getting. Though sir your baking is very hard and not tasty but you deserves appreciation as it is done by your own.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for saying this.
Date: 10/31/2019 8:03:00 AM
Cold hands and a warm heart make for a flaky crust pie . . . ; )
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 9:05:00 AM
Yes it certainly does!
Date: 10/30/2019 10:39:00 PM
Caren, So nice to find this pie. If I could bake I would try for such a crust as you described. Did I tell you I've missed the baker? -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 5:41:00 AM
My mother is the most wonderful baker in the whole universe, and I miss her pies. I am too impatient to be much use in a kitchen. Thank you so much Richard.
Date: 10/30/2019 9:03:00 PM
oh that is too clever, Caren! I remember how i could never get crust to work out either. However, I adore cooking and baking. Just not good with crust!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 5:42:00 AM
I have to say there is something about a woman who knows how to make a good crust. I have no idea how but wow, the after effects are amazing!
Date: 10/30/2019 3:02:00 PM
ha! i can relate to this. nothing i ever baked tasted as good as my grandmother's versions...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 5:43:00 AM
My grandmother baked a vanilla cake with cinammon and sugar frosting we could never replicate Ilene.
Date: 10/30/2019 1:35:00 PM
Love is surely the ingredient 'without which not!' I.e., it is the sine qua non of every great-tasting recipe I know of. Brilliantly written, Caren! Thank YOU! Cheers, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. Thank you!
Date: 10/30/2019 12:35:00 PM
It is not easy to make that flaky crust Caren! I understand. Great one :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2019 5:44:00 AM
My mother swears by this icy water, yet it has not ever worked for me so there is something else. Elusive and absent.
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