I Am Living

It is the old man from the threefold of life 
To whom I have taken control on this
But the poet whatever 
The cause should be 
The one who must walk 
Along the concept
For which beauty fades from 
Measure of apparent
Size of naturalistic explanations
Regardless how rich your heart is 
And none of us is able pass through.

It is the poet who is living 
Psychologically into this burrow of guesses 
And paradises within him
With reflection and with correction 
Of life this creates such 
A record that commands he must live or die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/15/2012 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win George xx
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George Zamalea
Date: 12/15/2012 5:46:00 PM
I truly appreciate your generous comments and thank you very much. It's been a honor.
Date: 12/14/2012 9:04:00 PM
George , congratulations in the "SUZETTE PRIME:" contest... :-) PD
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Date: 12/14/2012 9:46:00 PM
I was delighted with such honor and many thanks.
Date: 12/14/2012 6:36:00 PM
Congrad's on your win in this challenging form Light & Love
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George Zamalea
Date: 12/14/2012 9:50:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed myself for your comments and I deeply appreciate it. Thanks.
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