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I Am Inhaling You

In between two breaths
I am inhaling you dear,
a heady fragrance
mixing with my red blood cells,
fatal intoxication.




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Gwendolen Song

February 1, 2012 at 3:18 AM

great science intermingled with love..congrats with this win...Gwendolen

Ralph Taylor

January 31, 2012 at 5:41 PM

Congrats, Kash. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Kim Merryman

January 31, 2012 at 3:10 PM

Nicely done, Kash. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 31, 2012 at 12:46 PM

Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 31, 2012 at 11:33 AM

Congratulations Kash and so true,well done x

Lizanne Scholtz

January 31, 2012 at 10:40 AM

congratulations on your win Kash. elizabeth

David Williams

January 31, 2012 at 10:37 AM

kash congrats on your win, a great mix..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 31, 2012 at 9:15 AM

super congrats Kash.. so luv this piece from title to last line.. a stupendous write luv..

Bob Quigley

January 31, 2012 at 8:39 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash. Well done

Sharon Winter

October 1, 2011 at 4:39 PM

love the feel to this, intoxicating indeed. well done. thank you for your kind comment. my poems are removed due to personal reasons. thank you for asking though. love, shar

Debbie Guzzi

July 9, 2011 at 6:00 PM

now, now....leave off with the punctuation..let it go...punctuation in Japanese equates with a sound, a sound counts as a syllable...no need to punctuate...a period indicates a complete thought...japanese verse is meant to be phrases not complete thoughts...much of the verse is to be in the readers mind ..first line is title..Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 8, 2011 at 6:22 AM

I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Kashinath. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol