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I Am Inhaling You

In between two breaths I am inhaling you dear, a heady fragrance mixing with my red blood cells, fatal intoxication. © 2011 ===========000=============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/1/2012 3:18:00 AM
great science intermingled with love..congrats with this win...Gwendolen
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Date: 1/31/2012 5:41:00 PM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/31/2012 3:10:00 PM
Nicely done, Kash. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Kash and so true,well done x
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:40:00 AM
congratulations on your win Kash. elizabeth
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:37:00 AM
kash congrats on your win, a great mix..David
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Date: 1/31/2012 9:15:00 AM
super congrats Kash.. so luv this piece from title to last line.. a stupendous write luv..
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kash. Well done
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Date: 10/1/2011 4:39:00 PM
love the feel to this, intoxicating indeed. well done. thank you for your kind comment. my poems are removed due to personal reasons. thank you for asking though. love, shar
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Date: 7/9/2011 6:00:00 PM
now, now....leave off with the punctuation..let it go...punctuation in Japanese equates with a sound, a sound counts as a syllable...no need to punctuate...a period indicates a complete thought...japanese verse is meant to be phrases not complete thoughts...much of the verse is to be in the readers mind ..first line is title..Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:22:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Kashinath. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2011 5:20:00 AM
This has to be a favorite Kash :) love it!!
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Date: 7/7/2011 11:16:00 PM
This one I like a LOT. Very very nice, Kash! You are into tanka this week I see.
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:48:00 PM
the kind of fatal intoxication I so luv Kash.. perfect and passionate .. oh so wow..
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