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I Am In Love With Poetry Soup - Understepping

I crack my shield and face the true world I am butterfly from a cocoon Free fly in, heed the noises above The wondrous keen love colored the grace Splendor the time, marvelous with words Half life written bare on poetry Wandered self in world of juicy soup Inspired by Richard Lamoureux format poem "Understepping style" Note: 9 syllables each line Read first word first line Second word second line Third word third line Fourth word fourth line Fifth word fifth line Sixth word sixth line Seventh word seventh line

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/30/2012 3:42:00 PM
Very,very well done my friend Yanny!! HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2012 11:20:00 AM
Happy New Year Yanny!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/29/2012 4:04:00 PM
Happy New Year Richard :D
Date: 12/28/2012 3:10:00 PM
I like it... I read some of Richards... wish i had time to think of one... love this style...pd
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Date: 12/27/2012 10:11:00 PM
nice style. liked it.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/27/2012 10:14:00 PM
Thanks Bidyut, i like it to :D
Date: 12/27/2012 6:09:00 PM
Hi Yanny see my response to your comment on my Understepping Two poem.
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Date: 12/27/2012 5:59:00 PM
Way to go Yanny! Excellent... you are my first successful student of "Understepping"
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/27/2012 6:04:00 PM
Yeaaayyyy!!! :D
Date: 12/27/2012 1:58:00 PM
Soup Mail
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Date: 12/27/2012 10:44:00 AM
Hi Yanny, I am honored you gave it a try. I call it "Understepping". Soup Mail
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Date: 12/27/2012 10:33:00 AM
Well I can see you succeeded Yanny love xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/27/2012 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Mandy :D

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