I am Gray

Late, I am gray of hair and mind;
I’m told it makes me look refined
the hair, the mind; they do not know
the black I hardly ever show.
I once was white, as were we all
but over many years, we fall.
I’ve tried some other colors too
I once was very, very blue,
then sunshine yellow for a while;
but all that smiling’s not my style.
I know some rainbow colored folk
happy, dashing, and so baroque
but I am gray, faithful, mature;
do I like it? I’m not so sure;
I wish I were still fiery red
but gray words are now safer said.
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August 21, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Can relate whole heartedly to this intuitive poem Terry. Its Brilliant. I see by the comments it was POTD. I never look at that item on Soup, but congrats (although very late). Best wishes Wen.
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:58 AM
Thank you Wen I never look at that item either only found out when someone congratulated me did not place in the contest though
Messina Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 2:18 AM
Love this, Terry. Belated Congratulations on POTD! Charlie
Miller Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Thank you Charles
Fowler Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Interesting journey through the palette here Terry. Congratulations! :)
Miller Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 3:24 AM
Thank you so much
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August 17, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Terry, congratulations on your POTD! This is a marvelous poem on maturing and a wonderful commentary on the stages of life! Wonderful images. So well done! Blessings to you!
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:56 AM
Thank you Sam
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August 16, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor, Terry! Well-deserved my friend. Bill
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Bill
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August 15, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Wisdom. (the color gray) That's what it is. And to say it's not you, well, it is my dear friend. I understand that you wanted change, as coloring goes, but in the end, it is who you are. The natural look. Congratulations Terry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words
Godwin Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Was this inspired by a poem about an aging spouse + a color contest? Oh, who cares what inspired this delightful poem that despite its playful nature has much depth. A JOY to read, Terry. Inspires me to write a color .... hmm, don't know yet. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:57 AM
It was for the "I am (insert colour)" contest thank you for your kind comments, much appreciated
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August 15, 2025 at 1:56 PM
Hello Terry, congratulations on winning POTD with your brilliantly crafted poem on aging. Loved it. Wishing you a wonderful weekend as you celebrate.
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:58 AM
Thank you so much
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August 15, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Hello Terry, Congrats on POTD. I love how you wander through colors like they’re chapters in a life story with the blues, the sunshine yellows, the fiery reds and then settle into gray with a shrug that’s half acceptance, half rebellion. It’s so human. And honestly, the rhythm and rhyme make it feel like we’re just sitting together, swapping life truths over coffee. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:58 AM
Thank you so much Daniel
Scott Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 11:18 AM
I am very impressed by this! And congrats on the Poem of the Gray..er..Day. Marvellously colourful self-reflection. Blessings S:) x
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Ha Ha, thank you so much Sam
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August 15, 2025 at 10:05 AM
Congrats on a very colorful POTD, Terry.
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Thank you Jim
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August 15, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful "I am Gray" write. I Am Pink. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day with your win...........
Miller Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Thank you Pink Lady
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August 15, 2025 at 8:20 AM
Your poem "I am Gray" is incredibly relatable and speaks to the universal experience of looking back on who you were and grappling with who you've become. The way you use color to chart your life's journey—from the fiery red of youth to the "safer" gray of maturity—is both creative and deeply moving. The line about wishing you were still fiery red, while acknowledging the comfort of being gray, really captures a quiet, honest truth about aging. It's a beautiful piece of self-reflection.
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much Jami for your kind and thoughtful words
Lawless Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 6:45 AM
love the subtle final couplet...
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:33 AM
;-)
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August 15, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Hello Terry miller :-) Great and deep write! Very enjoyed read! congratulation on your p.o.t.d. :-) Have a nice time!
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much
Kitchin Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Terry, a great poem, there's a wonderful sophistication and maturity that goes along with getting gray. Congratulations on POTD.
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:35 AM
This is true Tania, thank you for your comments
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August 15, 2025 at 2:47 AM
excellent 'color' poem! Congrats on your POTD designation!
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Thank you Sara
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 1:33 AM
- Back with a congrats on your p.o.t.d., Terry...enjoy :) - I'm brown :))) - hugs
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:36 AM
At least we are not beige, thank you Anne-Lise
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August 15, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Terry, embrace the grey and enjoy the honour of poem of the day, congratulations… Beryl
Miller Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:36 AM
I try to, and thank you so much
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August 13, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Just love the array of colors in your poem, put together like no other, in your own unique way. Fave for me!
Miller Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 2:47 PM
I have a unique way? Just a poor old boy using simple words to try and express. Thank you so much Kim I do appreciate your so kind comments
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August 13, 2025 at 8:21 AM
- You're still a little blue, Terry :) -Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Miller Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 2:46 PM
I am a little; hugs back
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