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I am Gray

Late, I am gray of hair and mind;
I’m told it makes me look refined
the hair, the mind; they do not know
the black I hardly ever show.
I once was white, as were we all
but over many years, we fall.
I’ve tried some other colors too
I once was very, very blue,
then sunshine yellow for a while;
but all that smiling’s not my style.
I know some rainbow colored folk
happy, dashing, and so baroque
but I am gray, faithful, mature;
do I like it? I’m not so sure;
I wish I were still fiery red
but gray words are now safer said.

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Date: 8/15/2025 11:18:00 AM
I am very impressed by this! And congrats on the Poem of the Gray..er..Day. Marvellously colourful self-reflection. Blessings S:) x
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Date: 8/15/2025 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on a very colorful POTD, Terry.
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Date: 8/15/2025 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful "I am Gray" write. I Am Pink. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day with your win...........
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Date: 8/15/2025 8:20:00 AM
Your poem "I am Gray" is incredibly relatable and speaks to the universal experience of looking back on who you were and grappling with who you've become. The way you use color to chart your life's journey—from the fiery red of youth to the "safer" gray of maturity—is both creative and deeply moving. The line about wishing you were still fiery red, while acknowledging the comfort of being gray, really captures a quiet, honest truth about aging. It's a beautiful piece of self-reflection.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Jami for your kind and thoughtful words
Date: 8/15/2025 6:45:00 AM
love the subtle final couplet...
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:33:00 AM
;-)
Date: 8/15/2025 5:29:00 AM
Hello Terry miller :-) Great and deep write! Very enjoyed read! congratulation on your p.o.t.d. :-) Have a nice time!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/15/2025 3:46:00 AM
Terry, a great poem, there's a wonderful sophistication and maturity that goes along with getting gray. Congratulations on POTD.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:35:00 AM
This is true Tania, thank you for your comments
Date: 8/15/2025 2:47:00 AM
excellent 'color' poem! Congrats on your POTD designation!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 8/15/2025 1:33:00 AM
- Back with a congrats on your p.o.t.d., Terry...enjoy :) - I'm brown :))) - hugs
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:36:00 AM
At least we are not beige, thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 8/15/2025 12:50:00 AM
Terry, embrace the grey and enjoy the honour of poem of the day, congratulations… Beryl
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/15/2025 8:36:00 AM
I try to, and thank you so much
Date: 8/13/2025 9:03:00 AM
Just love the array of colors in your poem, put together like no other, in your own unique way. Fave for me!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/13/2025 2:47:00 PM
I have a unique way? Just a poor old boy using simple words to try and express. Thank you so much Kim I do appreciate your so kind comments
Date: 8/13/2025 8:21:00 AM
- You're still a little blue, Terry :) -Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/13/2025 2:46:00 PM
I am a little; hugs back

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