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I Am Buttercup

I am Buttercup, swaying in breeze
Ah Ah Choo! Something's making me sneeze.
Just hold on...now I see
It's that darn Busy Bee
And he's swapping my pollen for fleas.



for 'Are you Bugged'...and in response to James Fraser's 'Pollen Calling'

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/10/2010 1:55:00 PM

Hi Sharon :) thanks for your wonderful comments ^_^ and wow time went by that quickly--she's 4?? But I bet just as adorable as ever-- will definitely keep my eyes peeled for her pics--& lol yup, thinking of rewards for dog-sitting might be a tad harder ;) I hope you're having a great week-- and an even better weekend :) hugs :)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/8/2010 2:04:00 AM

Really cute poem, Sharon. Pollen for fleas...who would have thought? Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Raj Nandy

Date: 8/7/2010 9:14:00 PM

SHARON , A nice cute poem ! Congrats on your deserving win ! -Raj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2010 6:34:00 PM

Congrats Sharon on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this good one.. enjoy another sweet victory..with luv.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/7/2010 5:28:00 AM

Gesundheit, Sharon! ;) Super congrats on being in the winners' circle with this one ;) enjoyed this sneezy limerick of yours, maybe you can swap those fleas again for pollen?? & haha your comments in my *lokt* write was so much fun :Dthat was way too cool that you thought it was Tagalog lol I just might write another one, it was so much fun to do! hope your Saturday's all good hugs--nikko :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/7/2010 4:02:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Sharon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 10:17:00 PM

congats for the HM, Sharon. Hope you had a nice day. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 8/6/2010 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your Buttercup success, Sharon. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2010 10:55:00 AM

Oh my, my little busy bee has been naughty. What a thing to do, to a lovely Buttercup. Once a busy bee, now a has bee-n. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem, Sharon >> James