I Am Bored With Disenchantment

Deep, deep, deep like the old closed cold cold grave
Down in a dark chamber of loneliness
Resides this horrible and constant boredom
Never is there a slight filling this need 

Romance disappeared like misty morn fog
It was clinging wrapped like very wet tee-shirts
But slowly dried and left me wondering
What in the world has really happened here

Was not like tsunami with deadly waves
More subtle like soft splashing gentle waves
Those of low tide on a very calm day
Romance gone__disenchantment here remains

Contest:"I Am Bored With____"
Sponsor: Linda-Marie
Written by:Sara Kendrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/23/2011 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Sara. I liked this poem from the very first time I read it!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:50:00 PM
Disenchantment, a great idea for this contest. Very intense emotions about a super sensitive topic. I too am bored with disenchantment-maybe we just have to find joy in other things.. Congrats on your win, Sara. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 9:01:00 AM
A fine win indeed, beautifully written. Congrats x
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:20:00 AM
Many Congrats Sara on 2nd spot in the winners list in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/13/2011 12:24:00 AM
Very nice. Congrats
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Date: 5/12/2011 3:58:00 PM
Great to see your success Sara with this worthy poem second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:25:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Sara : )
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:17:00 AM
Dear Sara, Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Sara
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:51:00 AM
The eternal hole in the soul..We poets suffer more than most..A lovely ,visual poem. Congratulations on your win. Brenda
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:55:00 AM
Nicely penned inner thoughts, hope they're just a poet's creativity. Congrats Sara on your win.love, gautami
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:29:00 PM
This is so sad Sara. God Bless. Many congrats for this win dear.
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved 2nd Place, Sara. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:44:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your success in my contest with this stunning entry luv.. thankxx for constant support...
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:26:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Sara. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. We are still waiting on the results of the tests my husband had a couple days ago Sara. Thank you for asking. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:30:00 PM
"Great poetry" Betty Culberson
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Date: 4/25/2011 2:53:00 AM
Excellent entry for the contest, liked the metaphors.
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:27:00 AM
Wow i think you must score high with this Sara.
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Date: 4/23/2011 9:34:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Sara, .. enjoyed reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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Date: 4/23/2011 4:23:00 PM
A revealing write,my friend. I think many are bored with this!!! Good writing!
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Date: 4/23/2011 3:23:00 PM
Happy Easter to u and your family..to Doris too enjoy the blessings of God Sara and great blog u posted too luv..enjoy..
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:53:00 AM
really a well-scribed piece , sara with distinct metaphors and mood... was out on a holiday and felt good i caught this radiant work! best winnig streaks to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:21:00 PM
that is very nice and has a good flow good luck in the contest cory
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Date: 4/22/2011 12:21:00 PM
Well dear poet, this Free-verse does carry dienchantment with clarity, boredom ! Great write Sara ! I'm very happy that I stopped by, have a wonderful weekend...much love, james
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