Sara Kendrick Poet Blank verse

I Am Bored With Disenchantment

Deep, deep, deep like the old closed cold cold grave
Down in a dark chamber of loneliness
Resides this horrible and constant boredom
Never is there a slight filling this need 

Romance disappeared like misty morn fog
It was clinging wrapped like very wet tee-shirts
But slowly dried and left me wondering
What in the world has really happened here

Was not like tsunami with deadly waves
More subtle like soft splashing gentle waves
Those of low tide on a very calm day
Romance gone__disenchantment here remains

Contest:"I Am Bored With____"
Sponsor: Linda-Marie
Written by:Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2011 at 8:49 PM Congratulations on this fine win, Sara. I liked this poem from the very first time I read it!!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 11:00 AM Congratulations Sara on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol

Gwendolen Song May 14, 2011 at 4:50 PM Disenchantment, a great idea for this contest. Very intense emotions about a super sensitive topic. I too am bored with disenchantment-maybe we just have to find joy in other things.. Congrats on your win, Sara. Gwendolen

Emma Buckeridge May 13, 2011 at 9:01 AM A fine win indeed, beautifully written. Congrats x

Dr Hitendra Mehta May 13, 2011 at 2:20 AM Many Congrats Sara on 2nd spot in the winners list in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Samual Ronthorpe May 13, 2011 at 12:24 AM Very nice. Congrats

John Freeman May 12, 2011 at 3:58 PM Great to see your success Sara with this worthy poem second place. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne May 12, 2011 at 12:25 PM Many congrats on your win, Sara : )

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2011 at 9:17 AM Dear Sara, Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 12, 2011 at 6:55 AM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Sara

Brenda Atry May 12, 2011 at 5:51 AM The eternal hole in the soul..We poets suffer more than most..A lovely ,visual poem. Congratulations on your win. Brenda

Gautami Phookan May 12, 2011 at 4:55 AM Nicely penned inner thoughts, hope they're just a poet's creativity. Congrats Sara on your win.love, gautami

Tahera Mannan May 11, 2011 at 9:29 PM This is so sad Sara. God Bless. Many congrats for this win dear.

Ralph Taylor May 11, 2011 at 7:27 PM Congrats on a well deserved 2nd Place, Sara. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 11, 2011 at 6:44 PM Congrats Sara on your success in my contest with this stunning entry luv.. thankxx for constant support...

Carol Sunshine Brown April 27, 2011 at 10:26 AM Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Sara. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. We are still waiting on the results of the tests my husband had a couple days ago Sara. Thank you for asking. Love, Carol

Betty Culberson April 25, 2011 at 3:30 PM "Great poetry" Betty Culberson

Anthony Nutter April 25, 2011 at 2:53 AM Excellent entry for the contest, liked the metaphors.

Joe Maverick April 24, 2011 at 7:27 AM Wow i think you must score high with this Sara.

Poet Destroyer A April 23, 2011 at 9:34 PM Good luck in the contest Sara, .. enjoyed reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2011 at 4:23 PM A revealing write,my friend. I think many are bored with this!!! Good writing!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 23, 2011 at 3:23 PM Happy Easter to u and your family..to Doris too enjoy the blessings of God Sara and great blog u posted too luv..enjoy..

Nette Onclaud April 23, 2011 at 11:53 AM really a well-scribed piece , sara with distinct metaphors and mood... was out on a holiday and felt good i caught this radiant work! best winnig streaks to you! :) huggs, nette

Cory Long April 22, 2011 at 4:21 PM that is very nice and has a good flow good luck in the contest cory

James Peranteau April 22, 2011 at 12:21 PM Well dear poet, this Free-verse does carry dienchantment with clarity, boredom ! Great write Sara ! I'm very happy that I stopped by, have a wonderful weekend...much love, james

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