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I Am Bored With Disenchantment

Deep, deep, deep like the old closed cold cold grave Down in a dark chamber of loneliness Resides this horrible and constant boredom Never is there a slight filling this need Romance disappeared like misty morn fog It was clinging wrapped like very wet tee-shirts But slowly dried and left me wondering What in the world has really happened here Was not like tsunami with deadly waves More subtle like soft splashing gentle waves Those of low tide on a very calm day Romance gone__disenchantment here remains Contest:"I Am Bored With____" Sponsor: Linda-Marie Written by:Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2011 8:49:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine win, Sara. I liked this poem from the very first time I read it!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/14/2011 4:50:00 PM

Disenchantment, a great idea for this contest. Very intense emotions about a super sensitive topic. I too am bored with disenchantment-maybe we just have to find joy in other things.. Congrats on your win, Sara. Gwendolen

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/13/2011 9:01:00 AM

A fine win indeed, beautifully written. Congrats x

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/13/2011 2:20:00 AM

Many Congrats Sara on 2nd spot in the winners list in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 5/13/2011 12:24:00 AM

Very nice. Congrats

John Freeman

Date: 5/12/2011 3:58:00 PM

Great to see your success Sara with this worthy poem second place. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 5/12/2011 12:25:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, Sara : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2011 9:17:00 AM

Dear Sara, Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/12/2011 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Sara

Brenda Atry

Date: 5/12/2011 5:51:00 AM

The eternal hole in the soul..We poets suffer more than most..A lovely ,visual poem. Congratulations on your win. Brenda

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/12/2011 4:55:00 AM

Nicely penned inner thoughts, hope they're just a poet's creativity. Congrats Sara on your win.love, gautami

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/11/2011 9:29:00 PM

This is so sad Sara. God Bless. Many congrats for this win dear.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/11/2011 7:27:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved 2nd Place, Sara. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 6:44:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your success in my contest with this stunning entry luv.. thankxx for constant support...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2011 10:26:00 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Sara. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. We are still waiting on the results of the tests my husband had a couple days ago Sara. Thank you for asking. Love, Carol

Betty Culberson

Date: 4/25/2011 3:30:00 PM

"Great poetry" Betty Culberson

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/25/2011 2:53:00 AM

Excellent entry for the contest, liked the metaphors.

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/24/2011 7:27:00 AM

Wow i think you must score high with this Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 9:34:00 PM

Good luck in the contest Sara, .. enjoyed reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2011 4:23:00 PM

A revealing write,my friend. I think many are bored with this!!! Good writing!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2011 3:23:00 PM

Happy Easter to u and your family..to Doris too enjoy the blessings of God Sara and great blog u posted too luv..enjoy..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/23/2011 11:53:00 AM

really a well-scribed piece , sara with distinct metaphors and mood... was out on a holiday and felt good i caught this radiant work! best winnig streaks to you! :) huggs, nette

Cory Long

Date: 4/22/2011 4:21:00 PM

that is very nice and has a good flow good luck in the contest cory

James Peranteau

Date: 4/22/2011 12:21:00 PM

Well dear poet, this Free-verse does carry dienchantment with clarity, boredom ! Great write Sara ! I'm very happy that I stopped by, have a wonderful weekend...much love, james