I Am Black

i am black,
and the shadows of my hair 
become needles that sting the soil
during midday.

i suffer the torture of the heavens,
of Helios and the legends of the air.
they dwell above my being,
and they cast umbras on mine.

i roam on the desert of apathy,
not mine, but from the silence
of those whose lips are 
stitched by my very own hair.

i am black,
i live in the half-world of your faces during sunshine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/4/2009 10:48:00 AM
A amazing poem. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/2/2009 10:26:00 PM
Arch, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 8:14:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for all. Never thought this was good enough. Appreciate it!
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Date: 9/26/2009 9:26:00 AM
Arch, just dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:53:00 AM
Congrats 2u on your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Arch. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on "I Am Black" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations my friend on your lovely poetry being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 6/23/2009 11:10:00 AM
Fantastic
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Date: 6/22/2009 8:02:00 AM
Thank you for all the nice words. I just noticed this piece of mine got featured this week.
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:53:00 AM
Arch - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/21/2009 6:49:00 PM
Much to think about in your words. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:14:00 AM
I love the line roaming the desert of apathy. Great write from a talented individual.
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Date: 5/26/2009 1:22:00 PM
wow, wow, this is poetry soaked in the gold of beauty ... love it, thank you for this great display of brilliance and talent.
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Date: 5/26/2009 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mr. Higgins.
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:03:00 AM
This is incredible my friend..I love needles that sting the soil..powerful line....I am putting this in my faves.
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