I Am Back-Tracking

I am back-tracking; I am still back-tracking.
There are ancient caves in my memory.
A lit torch shines color and sense onto forgotten walls.
I am walking backwards in order to save tomorrow.

There are ancient caves in my memory.
My sack of intentions bruises against my back.
I am walking backwards in order to save tomorrow.
I am not worried about finding my way back.

My sack of intentions bruises against my back.
A lit torch shines color and sense onto forgotten walls.
I am not worried about finding my way back.
I am back-tracking; I am still back-tracking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/21/2011 10:27:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you Matt for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:04:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2011 1:01:00 PM
Wonderful write Matt.Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 3/19/2011 1:05:00 AM
Congrats Matt, enjoyed this, so much truth here. Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:25:00 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Matt.
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Matt on your HM in Paula's Pantoum contest.. enjoy your special honor for this vibrant write luv..
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:32:00 AM
An awesome job Matt, great to see your success.. Congratulations on your worthy victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/5/2011 10:26:00 PM
a few steps back to gather insights will help us move a hundred steps forward, matt.. enligthening and full of depth.. winning wishes to you! :) hugggs, nette
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