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I Am Asleep

Readers, listen unto me: what a strange discovery! I'm aware that I am sleeping, as about the world I'm creeping;  which means, if I'm not mistaken, you'll disappear when I awaken; or could it be that as I'm dreaming, only I'm insanely seeming;  and you are in the here and now.  This, I will happily allow. For this reason, therefore, hence, please wake me up so I make sense.

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Date: 12/25/2024 9:48:00 AM
I enjoy this poem of philosophy. Each person want his/her space, but do we exist on the same plane? I'm fine with never knowing.
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David Crandall
Date: 12/25/2024 10:04:00 AM
Hmm, I don't know the answer either! Maybe, we're all on different planes, sharing the same airspace once in a while.
Date: 12/24/2024 8:18:00 PM
I enjoyed the world of dreams and reality! Great, David!
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David Crandall
Date: 12/25/2024 10:01:00 AM
Glad you liked it Kim!
Date: 12/24/2024 2:22:00 PM
Creative one. Is it real or not? Who knows? Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 12/24/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Sara!

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