I Am After All Human

I shave my own hair.
I cut it and remember
My own private holocaust.

Those things the imagination plays with.
Little toys of horror, 
lingering in that skull I clean.

The blade runs close to the flesh 
and control of it is mercy.

Anna had a beating heart, 
going for a cyanide shower.

Mine is built like a furnace with bricks. 
Cold hard brick that can withstand 
the heat of hell. 

Poetry affords me my temporal descent 
into tenderness.

Ah,feelings,vulnerability,flesh, 
blood dripping from my scalp.

I am crying tonight over a Rilke poem. 
My wife also cries with me.
I am after all human.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/27/2014 5:16:00 AM
Them words are full of power and awesomely emotive. Well penned.
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:38:00 AM
Where have you been? Why oh why weren't you on the Soup before now. Your poetry is amazing, bursting with raw emotion and power.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 4:43:00 AM
OH ! thank you. I am blushing !
Date: 11/21/2014 9:24:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Martin. This international community of poets affords ample opportunity for connection, affirmation and encouragement. You will find friends here.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/26/2014 12:57:00 AM
I am enjoying myself on this site. Thank you !
Date: 11/19/2014 8:48:00 AM
:) such powerful write.. :) keep writing.. :)
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/21/2014 1:51:00 AM
thank you very much
Date: 11/17/2014 9:56:00 AM
Of course you are! And you are far from hell, my friend. We are all sinners saved by the grace of God for those who have accepted Him and follow His ways.
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Martin Lochner
Date: 11/19/2014 12:58:00 AM
Amen
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