I Am Acorn

I plead for my brothers and sisters
The seasonal wind blows them away,
Observe the furry urchins gather them
One by one another’s life to save.

                                Loathsome clouds a tinge of darkness
                                Blend heedfully into soulless nights, 
                                The inclement weather caustic
                                My cousins the leaves in spiral flight.

Reduced to just a flutter
Groomed to change colour with age,
As they jive waltz and jive again
In thunder lightning and rain.

                                I am the last of mother’s children
                                When I too fall to the forest floor,
                                The fallen there await me
                                Must have heard my desperate call.

The winter solstice upon us
Where I lay beneath the warmth,
Red tan and gold cover me completely
Above them a blanket of crystal snow.

                                Their skin continues to crumble
                                Decomposed they keep me fed,
                                This afterlife the nourishment 
                                Their sustenance around does spread. 

Only after hibernation
Do I feel an urge to grow,
I’ve witnessed metamorphosis
Caterpillars in labour transformed.

                                Only now I feel a gradual motion
                                As I dig deeper into the ground,
                                Out of my head a commotion 
                                A seedling that searches for the sun.

With no mind to carry on the species 
Only an instinct an act to beget a son,
After all It is the merry month of May
And my growth at last as finally begun!

© Harry J Horsman 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/2/2020 3:38:00 PM
My friend, you wowed me with this truly exceptional piece! Every stanza golden, every word perfectly placed. a gleaming jewel and a definite fav too.. God bless...
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Date: 5/7/2020 9:22:00 PM
I don't envy the person who is judging this contest ... I've read a lot of fine poems on this topic! Certainly is a vibrant piece of colorful details and earth-kin spirit: brother and sister acorns, cousin-leaves, and so forth. And I really enjoyed how smoothing you carried us through the seasons (and the foreshadowing of the caterpillars in their cocoons). Excellent work.
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Date: 5/4/2020 10:58:00 PM
You describe the journey well Harry, Well penned..
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Date: 5/3/2020 11:42:00 AM
Innovative and cool my friend. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 5/1/2020 5:00:00 PM
This is so well done, I love the way you placed your stanzas. Go ahead acorns rejoice ! xo
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Date: 5/1/2020 10:06:00 AM
You became the acorn, lying under leaves and snow, you are fed kept warm and nourished, and your head pops up looking for the sun. 'you dig deeper into the ground.......A seedling that searches for the sun ----(until last line) And my growth at last has finally begun' What a delightful poem Harry, you have a true love for nature. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/30/2020 11:19:00 AM
You are an acorn indeed... You expressed this very well
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Date: 4/30/2020 10:15:00 AM
Love the layout Harry quite creative, hard to believe that where stands a mighty oak was once an acorn. Good luck and stay safe. Tom
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Date: 4/30/2020 6:51:00 AM
Friend I am awed by the poer,imagery and creativity of this truly wonderful piece. A truly fine and inspiring piece and a fav... GOd bless..
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Date: 4/30/2020 6:29:00 AM
You certainly gave a voice to acorn--and it tells the story eloquently through your words--all the best Harry for a TOP win.
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Date: 4/29/2020 10:28:00 PM
Dear Harry, I am charmed by your endearing and intimate portrayal of the bold acorn. Your artistry captivates me with vivid imagery and emotion. I loved 'furry urchins'.. we have many in our backyard that both entertain and annoy us. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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