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Shape/I Am a Tree
Copyright, ID # 1834308
All Rights, 06/30/2026, Constance La France
Plagiarism Prohibited

(Re-posted) June 30, 2026/ Human Written
For the International Contest, Tree
Sponsor, Seth Pina, Judged 07/02/2026

Second Place

I Am a Tree

 
* I am slipping into a dream, I am in a forest of trees so beautiful and I see myself a tree, my roots deep in the earth my branches raised to the sun. I am strength and I am courage. A river flows past me like a stream of glass. I am tranquility and serenity. The winds are whistling through my weeping leaves like a violin crying and echoing in the forest. I gave to life all the soul I had in me, all the tears, trembling, throbbing- and all the pain fell as Autumn leaves. My pain drifted away in red, and orange decay I rested under the snow and placed on a cloak of pure white beauty, then, in the Spring I put on an emerald gown so pretty and lovely.
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Gibbons Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations Constance on a well deserved win. I love how the words flow into shape of the tree. I am a great lover of trees and esp your outstanding creation here . A fav it has to be it blew me away. " I am strength and I am courage" inspired me to break out of writing same way and try different styles but one word scary ~ha ha hugs my friend <3
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:31 AM
Dorothy, thank you for the congratulations and lovely compliments and comment and FAV ~
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:11 PM
Constance, a big CONGRATS on your win with this creative piece. Great metaphors and other figures of speech! Janice
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:32 AM
Janicr, thank you for the congrats and compliment ~
Jones Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:16 AM
Great presentation Constance! Congratulations on a!
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Karen, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent poem, Constance.
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Sotto. thank you for the congratulations and compliment ~
George Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Beautifully shaped, your tree stands tall. Congratulations on your great win, dear Constance.
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:36 AM
Valsa. thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 3:58 AM
I love bith word and shape - well done
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:37 AM
Alison, thank you so much for the compliment ~
Buhagiar Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 3:30 AM
Your shape poem is brilliant. As is your poetry. Best for a win.
La France Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 4:38 AM
Victor, thank you for the compliment and encouragement ~
Daniel Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 6:54 PM
Lovely shape poem, Constance:)
La France Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:08 PM
Joanna, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate ~
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