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I am a red Rose

I am a red Rose





An ever fresh red Rose,
swaying to the tune of your love,
I am a true passion !

You mask my fragrance,
as I gladly accept,
I am a subtle sentiment !

Your very presence soothes,
and my fears placate,
I am a soft whorl of petals!

Thoughts of parting,
make me simmer and wither,
I am at peace, tranquil !

Love and passion invigorate,
Budding as a new flower,
I am a fresh red Rose !
 



Written May 6th, 2015
For Andrea's contest

"Red rose means love and passion "

7th place win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/17/2015 6:37:00 PM
Hey fresh red rose, your winning write was so lovely and well composed!
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:29:00 PM
nice win...pd
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:16:00 PM
Dr Upma. Congratulations. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/9/2015 11:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem Dr.Upma.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/9/2015 2:16:00 AM
Very nice,Dr. Upma. congratulations in my flower contest.
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Date: 5/7/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks for taking my suggestion Upma, I like the effect. It was already an excellent piece and this added a bit of sugar to your spice.
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Date: 5/6/2015 5:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Dr., good luck in the contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/7/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thnx eve!
Date: 5/6/2015 11:25:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Dr. Upma - Good luck in the contest - Roses are my fav. flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2015 8:28:00 AM
Oh so romantic.. A lovely and appealing piece, Dr. Upma!
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Date: 5/6/2015 7:48:00 AM
May I suggest you talk directly to him rather than about him. This would add to the romantic nature of the piece and make it feel more personal. ie: first stanza "swaying to the tune of your love".
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/7/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thnx for your kind visit and words Richard! Feeling better as I talk to him!
Date: 5/6/2015 5:59:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful poem Dr Sharma - good luck in the contest andrea has a tough job with this one there are some stunning entries:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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