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I Am a Prisoner, Rescue Me Premiere Contest Winner

I am living in a walled prison, Held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! I am alone, lonely, no one to talk to Gates are huge, metallic, always locked I watch from the gate, many roaming freely Playing, enjoying, having fun I too want to chat and play, run in open Alas! I cannot. I am living in walled prison, Held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! I am taken out daily, but they put a belt in my neck They hold the belt tightly, so that I don't escape When I try, it strangulates my neck It is very uncomfortable Even my short walk, my limited freedom, is controlled by them There is no way I can break free I am living in walled prison, Held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! I want to breed, have a mate and children I have my bodily needs I dream and imagine a family of my own I wish I could run away and fulfill my needs But I can't I am living in walled prison, Held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! Prisoner next door got a mate She gave birth to children was happy and joyous But these heartless humans gave all of them away to different humans Didn't even leave one for her She cried inconsolably, still can't get over it Separating a mother from child and spouse That's terrible They have family, loving each other, bring up their own children We also have emotions, please make them understand Why are these Humans so heartless? If someone did the same to them, how would they feel? I am living in walled prison, held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! Life is not just about food, clothing, shelter Satisfaction of emotional needs, Freedom to live as per own wish are essential for happiness They force me to take a bath, oh! How I hate it They cut my hair, take away my warmth My opinion doesn't count I am forced to accept whatever they do and say I am weaker than them I am helpless Please help me! I am living in walled prison, Held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! Put yourself in my shoes and think There are many like me around where you live Be empathetic, be sympathetic I am living in walled prison, Held captive by selfish, heartless humans Please rescue me, please set me free I beg to you, please help me! Note : Written from the perspective of a pet dog based on my experiences. 15.05.2021 Contest : Say It Again Sponsor : William Kekaula

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Date: 5/16/2021 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful yet sad write. It is so true. Before I moved, I walked dogs on Sat so they could get out of their cages. They were waiting to be rescued. Have a blessed day..................
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/16/2021 11:35:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments. Walking dogs... it was a wonderful deed indeed! Proud of you. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/16/2021 1:27:00 AM
Wonderful personification, Rama, congrats on your well-deserved trophy win:)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/16/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Joe! An animal lover. See this happening around. Wanted to give voice to those who are helpless. Caged birds are worse. Poor creatures. Do take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/16/2021 5:24:00 AM
Thanks christuraj. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 7:54:00 PM
Deep thought! Congrats on your top win, Rama!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/16/2021 5:24:00 AM
Thanks Unseeking seeker. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 7:39:00 PM
Wow Rama! It’s so sad how animals get treated! This poem tugs at my heart strings. It’s great that you use your talent for poetry writing to bring their situation to light. Thank you for doing that. Well deserved first place win!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/16/2021 5:23:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer! An animal lover. See this happening around. Wanted to give voice to those who are helpless. Caged birds are worse. Poor creatures. Do take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 7:16:00 PM
This is wonderful, Rama! It breaks my heart to think of how some pets are treated. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings,Kim M
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/16/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Kim. An animal lover. See this happening around. Wanted to give voice to those who are helpless. Caged birds are worse. Poor creatures. Do take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 5:30:00 PM
Amazing work! Congrats on your win! Well earned! All the best, Jonathan J.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/15/2021 6:00:00 PM
Thanks. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 4:03:00 PM
I was truly taken back to a traumatic time, whereto, I also wrote (Pooch - Fable) about a shaken wagless dog and a grumpy oldster -- imagining of how such circumstances could ever be so. Dreadful knowing the indifference of certain segments of society. Your submission defines your heartfelt love of life. An honorable trophy win, deserving of a righteous soul, Aloha my friend!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/15/2021 5:59:00 PM
Thanks for the placement. Came as a surprise to me, but am glad. Now many pet owners will read this. Hopefully some will show some empathy. Caged birds are worse. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 7:16:00 AM
What a tear-jerking write Rama, no animal should be held a prisoner, they’re born free and free they should be to live life contentedly. They need shelter and looking after of course, but that can come safely behind homestead walls…. Belle
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/15/2021 7:20:00 AM
An animal lover. See this happening around. Wanted to give voice to those who are helpless. Caged birds are worse. Poor creatures. Glad you felt this tear-jerking. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/15/2021 7:14:00 AM
Very well imagined poem.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/15/2021 7:21:00 AM
An animal lover. See this happening around. Wanted to give voice to those who are helpless. Caged birds are worse. Poor creatures. Thanks for the complement. Take care, God bless!

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