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I Am a New Man

On the other hand, The evening is growing, My bedtime is calling; My body to rest. The stars aren’t pleasing, The moonshine is missing, And there’s a thunder; Afflicting my head. At the other end, Your silence is crawling, My heart still mourning; That you went away. I wish I can have you, Be changed and to love you, Be calm to remind you; That I am a new man.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/1/2022 11:18:00 AM

Hello Walter D. Tomeo, I hope she sees the new you. So noce to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2022 4:06:00 PM

Hello Robert, welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2022 3:58:00 PM

Hello Walter D, Tomeo, So nice to meet you. Well I hope she sees the changes. .Enjoy your evenong my friend.

Walter D Tomeo
Date: 6/1/2022 1:36:00 PM

Thanks so much ! The poem was written not talking about me but of a friend and yes I hope she can see my friend’s changes. They must be together soon I hope!!!