Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

I Am a Kite

I am a kite
Top at the height
With the thread broken

I know no rules
I know no direction
I know no boundaries

Singing with the breeze
Dancing with the storm and 
Moving with the blow
All has become my fad now

A flibbertigibbet, I am
With the stars
With the clouds and 
With the birds
Feel so light 
Going high and high and high

I am a kite
Top at the height
With the thread broken!

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Doug Vinson January 6, 2017 at 7:49 PM Wow - over a year since the last comment. Really great poem, Puvi. : ) Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 6, 2017 at 10:15 PM Hai Doug...thank you for the motivating comment! love and peace :)

Liam Mcdaid December 30, 2015 at 7:40 AM must say very masterfully painted beautiful pen free a a bird the kite smiles Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 30, 2015 at 9:13 AM :)) thank you for your time and comment liam....love and peace :))

John Fleming December 30, 2015 at 2:28 AM Amazing what one can find tucked away in the corner of an old leather baccy pouch! My best regards for the coming New Year, mucker. :-) john Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 30, 2015 at 9:21 AM thank you for your amazing comment and your time john :) wishing you a wonderful and peaceful new year ahead :))

Kelly Deschler November 27, 2015 at 8:58 PM How truly wonderful it would be to soar so freely... Beautifully written and expressed. This poem was a joy to read! Nicely done :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 27, 2015 at 9:18 PM thank you Kelly for stopping by and leaving a soothing comment :) love and hugs :*

Arthur Vaso November 20, 2015 at 8:48 PM Love the last verse, one could read this many ways! Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 20, 2015 at 9:15 PM yes I meant it arthur :) Thank you :)) God bless..

Lin Lane November 20, 2015 at 11:30 AM A flibbertigibbet, are you? lol but oh oh! You've managed to get free? Nice little whimsical poem, Rem. Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 20, 2015 at 8:46 PM Hahaha..;) thanks for the lovely comment dear..love and hugs..may God bless you with a lot of happinesa and peace..

Eric Boddie November 20, 2015 at 10:47 AM I have been that high....where I could kiss the sky....passing cloud 9 by....just the simple truth, no lie....lol Lin Lane November 20, 2015 at 11:31 AM I always like the extra bonus of reading Eric's contribution. ;) Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 20, 2015 at 10:50 AM hahahaha.....thank you rhymer... :) Love and peace..