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I Am a Kite

I am a kite
Top at the height
With the thread broken

I know no rules
I know no direction
I know no boundaries

Singing with the breeze
Dancing with the storm and 
Moving with the blow
All has become my fad now

A flibbertigibbet, I am
With the stars
With the clouds and 
With the birds
Feel so light 
Going high and high and high

I am a kite
Top at the height
With the thread broken!

Copyright © Punnia Viswan Bhatia | Year Posted 2015

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Doug Vinson Date: 1/6/2017 7:49:00 PM Wow - over a year since the last comment. Really great poem, Puvi. : ) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 1/6/2017 10:15:00 PM Hai Doug...thank you for the motivating comment! love and peace :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 12/30/2015 7:40:00 AM must say very masterfully painted beautiful pen free a a bird the kite smiles Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/30/2015 9:13:00 AM :)) thank you for your time and comment liam....love and peace :))

John Fleming Date: 12/30/2015 2:28:00 AM Amazing what one can find tucked away in the corner of an old leather baccy pouch! My best regards for the coming New Year, mucker. :-) john Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/30/2015 9:21:00 AM thank you for your amazing comment and your time john :) wishing you a wonderful and peaceful new year ahead :))

Kelly Deschler Date: 11/27/2015 8:58:00 PM How truly wonderful it would be to soar so freely... Beautifully written and expressed. This poem was a joy to read! Nicely done :) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/27/2015 9:18:00 PM thank you Kelly for stopping by and leaving a soothing comment :) love and hugs :*

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/20/2015 8:48:00 PM Love the last verse, one could read this many ways! Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/20/2015 9:15:00 PM yes I meant it arthur :) Thank you :)) God bless..

Lin Lane Date: 11/20/2015 11:30:00 AM A flibbertigibbet, are you? lol but oh oh! You've managed to get free? Nice little whimsical poem, Rem. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/20/2015 8:46:00 PM Hahaha..;) thanks for the lovely comment dear..love and hugs..may God bless you with a lot of happinesa and peace..

Eric Boddie Date: 11/20/2015 10:47:00 AM I have been that high....where I could kiss the sky....passing cloud 9 by....just the simple truth, no lie....lol Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/20/2015 11:31:00 AM I always like the extra bonus of reading Eric's contribution. ;) Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/20/2015 10:50:00 AM hahahaha.....thank you rhymer... :) Love and peace..