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I AM A FIREFLY - weekly poetry challenge

I am a small lantern  
in a vast, breathing dark~  
a pulse of light  
that remembers itself  
only when the night  
leans close enough  
to ask.  

I feel the world  
in flickers~  
the hush of grass bending,  
the cool brush of dusk  
against my wings,  
the way shadows soften  
when I rise.  

My glow is not constant.  
It is a pulse,  
a question,  
a brief confession  
to the sky.  
I shine  
because something inside me  
refuses to stay hidden.  

I drift between branches,  
a wandering ember,  
watching humans  
mistake me for magic  
when really  
I am only trying  
to be seen.  

The night carries me~  
a cradle of crickets,  
a chorus of quiet things  
that know how to listen.  
In their company,  
my small light  
feels enough.  

And when I land  
on a child’s open hand,  
I feel wonder  
rise like warm air~  
a soft recognition  
that even the smallest spark  
can change the shape  
of darkness.  

I glow  
because it is my nature.  
I glow  
because the world  
is gentler  
when something shines.  

I glow  
because for one brief moment  
I can show you  
how even a tiny life  
can light its own way.
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Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:39 PM
LOVE fireflies, beautiful work!!
Gibbons Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 9:09 AM
Wow a very beautiful write sara love " I am a small lantern in a vast breathing dark " ~ " I shine because something inside of me refuses to stay hidden " beautiful hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:51 PM
thank you, Dorothy! appreciate your visit and encouragement
George Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 1:34 AM
Beautiful poem. I love fireflies and have written poems on them, but not so beautiful as yours. I love the last stanza. It is a gem. Into my FAVE.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:52 PM
fireflies are one of my favorites as well...thanks for visiting and for the FAV. Grateful for you.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:48 PM
The night carries me~ a cradle of crickets, a chorus of quiet things… the hush of grass bending, the cool brush of dusk…ahh
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:52 PM
thank you, sweet Kim.
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Aww!! Such a nice work about those fireflies that we all like to see, but especially so for children. Quite an amazing insect in God's creation. Thank you for sharing, Way to go. Sara K.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:53 PM
I agree, they are fascinating insects...they seem almost spiritual
Scragg Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:51 AM
A very beautiful poem Sara, with an underlying message that nobody is ever too small to let their light shine and put their glow on the world. Very lovely. I like the way you reverse the feeling of wonder, that rather than the child being amazed, the Firefly is and feels lifted for it. :-D
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:53 PM
thanks for your kind and generous comments, Natasha. Grateful for you and your visits, hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:17 AM
What a lovely write/picture you have here. I enjoyed reading. Oh yes, as a young kid I remember putting them in jars.  "Good Luck"  Have a lovely day writing away............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:54 PM
I put them in jars as well....my granddad called them 'natures' night light :-)
DiMino Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Ah...beautiful! A FAV from me!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:51 PM
thanks for the visit and for the FAV, Joe...color me grateful
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