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I Am a Fat Oriole

I am a fat oriole from Baltimore
With baseball cap and baseball mitt
I became a star cause well I could really hit
Made my money, to build my nest
Never grew up, cause I was born with good luck
I am a big fat Oriole I say to you
Now I am retired
So I sit in by chair
Eating my Oreos, double stuffed flair
Oriole oriole eating my oreos
I am fat cookie, a Baltimore storio
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 11:58 PM
This is so clever and well written! As always, I enjoy your sense of humor and great wit! Now I'm craving a few Oreos!!! Well done, my friend!
Vaso Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 12:01 AM
Oh well, you have to imagine one day Oreo s and a massage!!!!!! Oh la la
Pinet Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Good little fun piece with tongue in cheek chuckles at the escapades of an "Baltimore Oriole". (sit in by chair) typo
Vaso Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Thank you Emile LOL I just noticed too!
Chircop Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Some men can have an easy life and get lucky indeed.. But I dont envy them though,the hard way makes us appreciate what We own more many a time, such as appreaciating orios. Hope you have plenty to share : ), excellent post, Charma.
Vaso Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Oh Charmaine, you have taken the words straight from my mouth, I couldn't agree more. Its not often I see such wisdom and beauty bundled together! hugs
Meade Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Nice! How do they taste with beer!! I am off tonight to watch the Texas Rangers play but my boyhood team are the Tigers!! You are the best my friend. 7
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:37 PM
You are way to kind, thanks!!!
Austin Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Good stuff - I am a very old Michigan State fan. I really will have to try your orios. Love, daver
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Thanks Daver
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:24 PM
I accidentally hit faved poet and realized I had not yet faved you as a poet yet. So TWO faves for you today!!
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:36 PM
wow, I got lucky today!!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:23 PM
hahaha.LOVE this. FAVED
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:36 PM
:) Thanks hugs
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 10:16 AM
ha ha ha LOVE it Arthur:-) Hugs jan xx 7
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Thanks Jan
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 8:41 AM
You should never totally grow up.... I thought you were the Hawk playing for the Expos...now I crave some oreos and milk
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:35 PM
LOL :)
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