I Am a Fat Oriole

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I am a fat oriole from Baltimore With baseball cap and baseball mitt I became a star cause well I could really hit Made my money, to build my nest Never grew up, cause I was born with good luck I am a big fat Oriole I say to you Now I am retired So I sit in by chair Eating my Oreos, double stuffed flair Oriole oriole eating my oreos I am fat cookie, a Baltimore storio

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/30/2015 11:58:00 PM

This is so clever and well written! As always, I enjoy your sense of humor and great wit! Now I'm craving a few Oreos!!! Well done, my friend!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/31/2015 12:01:00 AM

Oh well, you have to imagine one day Oreo s and a massage!!!!!! Oh la la

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/30/2015 10:06:00 AM

Good little fun piece with tongue in cheek chuckles at the escapades of an "Baltimore Oriole". (sit in by chair) typo

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/30/2015 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Emile LOL I just noticed too!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/30/2015 7:35:00 AM

Some men can have an easy life and get lucky indeed.. But I dont envy them though,the hard way makes us appreciate what We own more many a time, such as appreaciating orios. Hope you have plenty to share : ), excellent post, Charma.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/30/2015 3:38:00 PM

Oh Charmaine, you have taken the words straight from my mouth, I couldn't agree more. Its not often I see such wisdom and beauty bundled together! hugs

David Meade

Date: 5/29/2015 3:38:00 PM

Nice! How do they taste with beer!! I am off tonight to watch the Texas Rangers play but my boyhood team are the Tigers!! You are the best my friend. 7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2015 9:37:00 PM

You are way to kind, thanks!!!