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I am a fat oriole from Baltimore With baseball cap and baseball mitt I became a star cause well I could really hit Made my money, to build my nest Never grew up, cause I was born with good luck I am a big fat Oriole I say to you Now I am retired So I sit in by chair Eating my Oreos, double stuffed flair Oriole oriole eating my oreos I am fat cookie, a Baltimore storio

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Date: 5/30/2015 11:58:00 PM
This is so clever and well written! As always, I enjoy your sense of humor and great wit! Now I'm craving a few Oreos!!! Well done, my friend!
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Date: 5/31/2015 12:01:00 AM
Oh well, you have to imagine one day Oreo s and a massage!!!!!! Oh la la
Date: 5/30/2015 10:06:00 AM
Good little fun piece with tongue in cheek chuckles at the escapades of an "Baltimore Oriole". (sit in by chair) typo
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Date: 5/30/2015 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Emile LOL I just noticed too!
Date: 5/30/2015 7:35:00 AM
Some men can have an easy life and get lucky indeed.. But I dont envy them though,the hard way makes us appreciate what We own more many a time, such as appreaciating orios. Hope you have plenty to share : ), excellent post, Charma.
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Date: 5/30/2015 3:38:00 PM
Oh Charmaine, you have taken the words straight from my mouth, I couldn't agree more. Its not often I see such wisdom and beauty bundled together! hugs
Date: 5/29/2015 3:38:00 PM
Nice! How do they taste with beer!! I am off tonight to watch the Texas Rangers play but my boyhood team are the Tigers!! You are the best my friend. 7
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:37:00 PM
You are way to kind, thanks!!!
Date: 5/27/2015 12:53:00 PM
Good stuff - I am a very old Michigan State fan. I really will have to try your orios. Love, daver
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thanks Daver
Date: 5/27/2015 1:01:00 AM
Arthur.. Why am I craving now Oreos and milk? Thanks a lot ! ;)
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:36:00 PM
Aren't we all!!!!
Date: 5/26/2015 4:24:00 PM
I accidentally hit faved poet and realized I had not yet faved you as a poet yet. So TWO faves for you today!!
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:36:00 PM
wow, I got lucky today!!!!!
Date: 5/26/2015 4:23:00 PM
hahaha.LOVE this. FAVED
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:36:00 PM
:) Thanks hugs
Date: 5/26/2015 10:16:00 AM
ha ha ha LOVE it Arthur:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 5/26/2015 8:41:00 AM
You should never totally grow up.... I thought you were the Hawk playing for the Expos...now I crave some oreos and milk
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:35:00 PM
LOL :)