Notes About The Poem

I Am a Cliche

I am a cliché

A soul walked along the water
The winds yelling cliché cliché
A dark soul was on the other side waiting
The winds yelled again cliché cliché

The two souls met inside this cliché
Of dark poetic solitude
They ordered drinks and black roses
In the cafe of clichés

From the skies appeared an Angel
Looking down upon this earth
At the clichés of life
The angel too walked in the bar of dead souls

Immediately she realized
I have walked into a cliché of dreams
The most terrible of poem and verse
Attacks my very, my very, yes oh yes, my very soul

Then it dawned on this angel of the evening
That he too is a cliché and somewhat confused
The three of them in the darkness of life’s parodies
They downed some shots and spilled some blood

Slightly inebriated one looked at the other two?
He demanded what the hell is a cliché anyways?
The darkest of souls, replied, I think is Spanish for friends!
This narrative my friend is a poetic rendition of the three amigos

Touché
Ops
I mean cliché
My Lobster means it too
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:12 AM
You entertain without any effort at all my friend!! No clichés used here at anyone's expense! // paul
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Oh Paul this was with great effort and many drunken moons! :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:11 AM
HEy Buddy Arthur, you made me laugh here.. :D! ~Olive Eloisa
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:40 PM
That's my goal!
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 11:36 PM
hahaha.You slay me, oh cliche master!! And this is ANYthing but cliche!!
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:39 PM
Thank you dear Andrea!!!!
Spagnola Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Is there ' in cliche?
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:38 PM
sure, there was always that "in cliche crowd" :)
Spagnola Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 10:07 PM
A toast to you Arthur, salud :), jill
Vaso Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 10:16 PM
thank you, are we having french toast?
Nance Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 7:31 PM
:-) You know I dig this one !
Vaso Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 10:15 PM
thats obvious, we dig each other, in graveyards!
Bateman Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Outstanding Arthur!! I loved your Cliché write here very much. A "7" and this one's a FAV too. Best Always, Gary (P.S. The Lobster touch at the end is great!!)
Vaso Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Do you know of whom I am speaking? Closer to you than I !!!!!
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