I Am a 3

Heard her steps near Was all ears but Oh, fear crept in. +++ September 30, 1935 Path No. 9+30 =12 = 3 Destiny No. 9+30+1935 =30 = 3 September 17, 2014 Form : Than-bauk Eighth Place win

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Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 5:01:00 AM

Interesting

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/8/2014 9:52:00 PM

Than-bauk is new to me too, Congratulations, Dr. Ram. A bit like haiku, rather open-ended for interpretation. Just maybe, a teacher has caught you unawares. Regarless, a champion piece.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/7/2014 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Dr. I see you have tackled an unusual form....totally new to me. Sometimes sound instills more fear than sight! // paul

Roy Jerden

Date: 10/5/2014 6:04:00 AM

Back for congrats. There were a lot of three's in this contest, weren't there? Well done.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/4/2014 11:37:00 AM

Lovely form n excellent write Dr Ram! Congrats on big win!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/4/2014 10:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/4/2014 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. I like your Than-bauk

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/4/2014 4:07:00 AM

Congrats Dr, a worthy one is this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2014 2:09:00 AM

Dr. Ram, This is a pretty good Than-bauk. Thanks for taking my challenge and congrats in my contest.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 9/28/2014 7:27:00 PM

so very few words, but full of nuances. new form for me, seems to be fun! great write, Dr. Ram!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/4/2014 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations!

Roy Jerden

Date: 9/26/2014 9:20:00 AM

Double 3, not too many choices, eh! Interesting form with the moving internal rhyme. Good luck!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/25/2014 9:08:00 PM

This form is new to me too Dr. Ram. These few words share so much more! Great work. Best of luck in the contest.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/18/2014 10:06:00 AM

Well done Dr. Ram! Sure you captured this form perfectly! Lol....enjoyed it! I like the surprising thrilling element to it especially in the conclusive final last line. lol... xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2014 7:48:00 AM

I have never seen this form before Dr Mehta and I enjoyed the poem immensely:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2014 5:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Creative use of the idea..Thanks for the visits, prayers, comments ..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/18/2014 3:37:00 AM

The numbers do not make any sense to me, due to ignorance. The writing though is fantastic, Dr. Ram!

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/18/2014 5:43:00 AM

Same is my thinking. It's just a fun

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/17/2014 6:11:00 PM

really excellent vision in this

Juli- Michelle

Date: 9/17/2014 3:49:00 PM

Great poem! I love your beautiful words.. I don't know how you all have the time and ambition to post such pieces of art EVERY day but I love reading them!! Lovely piece. Thanks for visiting my work. Have a wonderful day, Juli-Michelle

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/18/2014 1:17:00 AM

I am about to be eighty and have all the time in the world. Poetry is a great refuge for the old age, Juli

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/17/2014 2:46:00 PM

Neat! I like it! Never heard of that form before either, now I must investigate, I always feel smarter and/or more curious after reading your posts :)

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/18/2014 1:18:00 AM

I hope to see you Than-bauk from you soon