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I Am a 3

Heard her steps near

Was all ears but

Oh, fear crept in.

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September 30, 1935
Path No.                  9+30 =12 = 3
Destiny No.    9+30+1935  =30 = 3

September 17, 2014
Form : Than-bauk
Eighth Place win

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Skat A Date: 5/27/2015 5:01:00 AM Interesting Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 10/8/2014 9:52:00 PM Than-bauk is new to me too, Congratulations, Dr. Ram. A bit like haiku, rather open-ended for interpretation. Just maybe, a teacher has caught you unawares. Regarless, a champion piece. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/7/2014 9:50:00 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. I see you have tackled an unusual form....totally new to me. Sometimes sound instills more fear than sight! // paul Login to Reply

Roy Jerden Date: 10/5/2014 6:04:00 AM Back for congrats. There were a lot of three's in this contest, weren't there? Well done. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/4/2014 11:37:00 AM Lovely form n excellent write Dr Ram! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/4/2014 10:02:00 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 8:35:00 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. I like your Than-bauk Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 10/4/2014 4:07:00 AM Congrats Dr, a worthy one is this. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/4/2014 2:09:00 AM Dr. Ram, This is a pretty good Than-bauk. Thanks for taking my challenge and congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Hija De La Luna Date: 9/28/2014 7:27:00 PM so very few words, but full of nuances. new form for me, seems to be fun! great write, Dr. Ram! Login to Reply Hija De La Luna Date: 10/4/2014 11:03:00 AM Congratulations!

Roy Jerden Date: 9/26/2014 9:20:00 AM Double 3, not too many choices, eh! Interesting form with the moving internal rhyme. Good luck! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/25/2014 9:08:00 PM This form is new to me too Dr. Ram. These few words share so much more! Great work. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 9/18/2014 10:06:00 AM Well done Dr. Ram! Sure you captured this form perfectly! Lol....enjoyed it! I like the surprising thrilling element to it especially in the conclusive final last line. lol... xxxx D. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2014 7:48:00 AM I have never seen this form before Dr Mehta and I enjoyed the poem immensely:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/18/2014 5:45:00 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Creative use of the idea..Thanks for the visits, prayers, comments ..Sara Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/18/2014 3:37:00 AM The numbers do not make any sense to me, due to ignorance. The writing though is fantastic, Dr. Ram! Login to Reply Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/18/2014 5:43:00 AM Same is my thinking. It's just a fun

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/17/2014 6:11:00 PM really excellent vision in this Login to Reply

Juli- Michelle Date: 9/17/2014 3:49:00 PM Great poem! I love your beautiful words.. I don't know how you all have the time and ambition to post such pieces of art EVERY day but I love reading them!! Lovely piece. Thanks for visiting my work. Have a wonderful day, Juli-Michelle Login to Reply Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/18/2014 1:17:00 AM I am about to be eighty and have all the time in the world. Poetry is a great refuge for the old age, Juli

Casarah Nance Date: 9/17/2014 2:46:00 PM Neat! I like it! Never heard of that form before either, now I must investigate, I always feel smarter and/or more curious after reading your posts :) Login to Reply Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/18/2014 1:18:00 AM I hope to see you Than-bauk from you soon