I Am

Syllable count:
8,6,4,2,2,4,6,8,8,6,4,2,2,4,6,8


In my eyes, i truly believe
You define perfection
The beholder
I am
You have
Me in a way
Seducing me, pleasure
Your silky hair, you scent unique
Figure like a coke bottle, your
skin, your magnificent 
Skin, Sahara,
Desert
Color
Telling, your eyes
Your deep hazelnut eyes
I find myself lost in your thoughts

This poem was actually different in 2001, same title but written differently. I revised and 
changed it into this style in 2006......JP....Revised 5/29/2006>>>>>Oringinal 
written:7/12/2001
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Cole Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 9:34 PM
So beautiful. I love your work.
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October 1, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Jared lovely freeverse love Jayne
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September 29, 2010 at 8:54 AM
JARED, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 29, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Hello! Jared, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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September 27, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared. Love, Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all..today... enjoyed with luv.. luv..
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 8:00 AM
Great poem here Jared, also a very good rhyme, I found in my comment box. On "The Promised Rest ( part 2 )". God Bless, bring forth from the heart you true potential continually. Moses!
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July 12, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Clever write Jared, not a form i have seen before>>James
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July 7, 2009 at 6:32 PM
Good poem, keep it up.
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