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I Am

For Contest You ask, “Who are you?” I answer, “I am; life.” You ask, “Is that all?” “Yes, life. It is all, complete, perfection!” I ask, “Who are you?” You say, “I’m married with beautiful children. I love Chinese food and boats, and work hard and play harder, and…” I say, “Stop! You are also life; breathing with blood pulsing through you, on a planet floating in space. All else are doings, thoughts, others, desires, memories, lists.” “So, that is my life. Isn’t it?” You ask. I reply, “You are life! Just as the pea, a rock, rabbit, trees, or a billionaire. They’re not doings, but beings. They just are, as we are. That’s enough, at this moment. And each moment is all we ever have.”

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Date: 3/20/2024 6:10:00 AM
David, I really like how you identify what is most important of all. The way you look at being versus doing is food for thought for all. You have a very subtle and humorous way of identifying a huge concept that often escapes consideration. This adds to the concept that we should treat our planet and everything on it with respect. That is surely not part of the equation today.
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Date: 3/14/2024 5:36:00 PM
Best wishes David! People cant go thrigh life without blaming or shaming others, or making them wrong. They, themselves, of course, never have an inner discourse. To point blame at them selves. Further, the truth is, this very moment may be our lasr…. we just dont get it. Nations of kvetchers, Read the poetry, we think somebody owes us a living. Pangie Pangie
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Date: 3/3/2024 8:55:00 AM
Although for some its not enough' David.. I like this a lot' 1st place from me.!
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Date: 3/3/2024 5:15:00 PM
Thanks for those words. And yes, it's hard to feel like 'that's enough'.
Date: 2/29/2024 8:48:00 AM
A wonderful write with a great/ending. I love this one. Have a blessed/great day..............
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Date: 2/24/2024 10:27:00 AM
That last line says it all! Excellent piece, David.
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Date: 2/22/2024 10:53:00 PM
Thought-provoking poetry, David. I like it! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, my friend. Bill
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:15:00 PM
A very philosophical poem that asks many questions. It makes me think more deeply. I enjoyed it .
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:29:00 PM
Each moment is all we ever have. Some wise words, my friend. Have a blessed day, David.
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