I Am

Are you that girl or guy
Who can gaze at the sky a while and smile
At the cotton candy clouds dipped in sunset
Are you that friend who could join in 
As bullfrog green sings brown sonnets
Serenading his one and only true love
Are you that soul who stands real close to deliver hugs
So warm they melt the moon causing swooning spooning
Are you the one who laughs in the sun 
especially at yourself finding human err
Are you the peace I seek in my dreams will 
I wake to find you there a thrill?
If not I am and who are you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Lehtmets Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 5:52 AM
<3
Lehtmets Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 5:59 AM
it should be an expression of love; a heart
Jones Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Mari thanks for reading. Not sure what that means. Hmmm
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 12:11 PM
This is such a sweet message, and I loved the creativity of this phrase: As bullfrog green sings brown sonnets Serenading his one and only true love
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Andrea thanks for liking.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:56 AM
You express such lovely sentiments Karen. Enjoyed the read. Glad you are!
Jones Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Vijay!
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:10 AM
So pretty, peaceful and joyful!
Jones Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:25 AM
Aw thanks BJ!
La France Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Karen, wonderful, I really like your poem, great writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Jones Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Aw thanks so much.
Palmer Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Yes I am, wonderful words, enjoyed your words
Jones Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Cool beans Richard. I am excited you are! Thanks for reading.
Romios Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 11:31 PM
I found this positive and thought provoking. Panagiota “Life is an adventure not a destination” My quote
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 9:32 PM
Thanks!
Leffanta Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Of course life is an adventure! People who have lived in the same body for an hundred years are still surprised by what it can - or can not - do! Aloha!
Jones Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:03 AM
I am glad you like it. Thanks Panagiota!
Hawkins Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Lovely Karen.
Jones Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Thank you for reading Shirley.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Lovely writing. God bless you. Love, Gina
Jones Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 1:43 PM
God bless you as well
Jones Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Regina you are kind thanks!
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 6:40 AM
I am glad you find pleasure and peace of mind in the beauty of Nature and warm human relationship, Karen. It is a blessing to live and think positively. ~ Best regards // paul
Jones Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Yes it is a blessing. Thanks again Paul.
Buehler Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Hello Karen, your poem is full of charming expressions and imagery. I love it. :)
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thanks so much Evelyn
Horsman Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Hi Karen, i'm Harry, when a young man i could do all of those things, getting past it now, but still love poetry, especially this one.
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 8:18 AM
lol in heat song is supposed to be heart song lol typos
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Hi Harry! Glad you like it and as a poet (have read your work) you are especially made to the core to do those things and more if not in life in heat song, in poem which is just as nice, Hugs. Age is an honor even if there are challenges.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 1:37 AM
God created you as you are. If things are wrong then pray for guidance.
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Amen. Do you find this poem to be negative for me it was just an affirmation not a sign of trouble. Thanks for reading them as I am still growing as a human as a poet.
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