I Am

Are you that girl or guy Who can gaze at the sky a while and smile At the cotton candy clouds dipped in sunset Are you that friend who could join in As bullfrog green sings brown sonnets Serenading his one and only true love Are you that soul who stands real close to deliver hugs So warm they melt the moon causing swooning spooning Are you the one who laughs in the sun especially at yourself finding human err Are you the peace I seek in my dreams will I wake to find you there a thrill? If not I am and who are you?

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Mari Lehtmets

Date: 10/3/2023 5:52:00 AM

Mari Lehtmets
Date: 10/3/2023 5:59:00 AM

it should be an expression of love; a heart

Karen Jones
Date: 10/3/2023 5:57:00 AM

Mari thanks for reading. Not sure what that means. Hmmm

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2021 12:11:00 PM

This is such a sweet message, and I loved the creativity of this phrase: As bullfrog green sings brown sonnets Serenading his one and only true love

Karen Jones
Date: 11/1/2021 2:38:00 PM

Andrea thanks for liking.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/26/2021 6:56:00 AM

You express such lovely sentiments Karen. Enjoyed the read. Glad you are!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/26/2021 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Vijay!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/26/2021 2:10:00 AM

So pretty, peaceful and joyful!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/26/2021 2:25:00 AM

Aw thanks BJ!

Constance La France

Date: 10/25/2021 2:21:00 PM

Karen, wonderful, I really like your poem, great writing ~ love and serenity _Constance

Karen Jones
Date: 10/25/2021 3:34:00 PM

Aw thanks so much.

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/25/2021 10:55:00 AM

Yes I am, wonderful words, enjoyed your words

Karen Jones
Date: 10/25/2021 11:33:00 AM

Cool beans Richard. I am excited you are! Thanks for reading.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/24/2021 11:31:00 PM

I found this positive and thought provoking. Panagiota “Life is an adventure not a destination” My quote

Karen Jones
Date: 11/1/2021 9:32:00 PM

Thanks!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/31/2021 11:32:00 AM

Of course life is an adventure! People who have lived in the same body for an hundred years are still surprised by what it can - or can not - do! Aloha!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/25/2021 12:03:00 AM

I am glad you like it. Thanks Panagiota!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/24/2021 7:36:00 PM

Lovely Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/24/2021 7:39:00 PM

Thank you for reading Shirley.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/24/2021 1:37:00 PM

Lovely writing. God bless you. Love, Gina

Karen Jones
Date: 10/24/2021 1:43:00 PM

God bless you as well

Karen Jones
Date: 10/24/2021 1:42:00 PM

Regina you are kind thanks!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2021 6:40:00 AM

I am glad you find pleasure and peace of mind in the beauty of Nature and warm human relationship, Karen. It is a blessing to live and think positively. ~ Best regards // paul

Karen Jones
Date: 10/24/2021 8:09:00 AM

Yes it is a blessing. Thanks again Paul.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/22/2021 12:28:00 PM

Hello Karen, your poem is full of charming expressions and imagery. I love it. :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2021 1:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Evelyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/22/2021 7:05:00 AM

Hi Karen, i'm Harry, when a young man i could do all of those things, getting past it now, but still love poetry, especially this one.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2021 8:18:00 AM

lol in heat song is supposed to be heart song lol typos

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2021 8:03:00 AM

Hi Harry! Glad you like it and as a poet (have read your work) you are especially made to the core to do those things and more if not in life in heat song, in poem which is just as nice, Hugs. Age is an honor even if there are challenges.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/22/2021 1:37:00 AM

God created you as you are. If things are wrong then pray for guidance.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2021 5:14:00 AM

Amen. Do you find this poem to be negative for me it was just an affirmation not a sign of trouble. Thanks for reading them as I am still growing as a human as a poet.