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I Alone

I have now - 
I had then
But that's an old tale of sorrow.
Let's go and have a drink.
My self-esteem has been hurt
and nothing but medicine will fix it.
I alone am to blame.
You, regarding me as a local nuisance,
You just laugh
I just fizzle out.
I don't see the humour.

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Skat A Date: 6/30/2016 10:26:00 AM Pippa, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT* Login to Reply Pippa Mcgivern Date: 7/6/2016 4:43:00 AM Wow, thanks so much! Definitely not accomplished, never even put a poem online until now. Thank you for your kind words, you have no idea how much your words mean.I was on a coffee date with a friend and started crying! Cheers,pippa

Daniel Turner Date: 6/30/2016 8:02:00 AM Just smile and consider yourself lucky. Pride mends quickly. The joy of true love is everlasting. Welcome to the soup! Login to Reply Pippa Mcgivern Date: 7/6/2016 4:45:00 AM Thank you. Love is abstract and what we make of it, and im too young to believe i've found it yet. Looking forward to getting the time to read your poetry

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/29/2016 11:54:00 PM Pippa,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Pippa Mcgivern Date: 7/6/2016 4:46:00 AM Aw thankyou so much. I would love some if ever you feel up to it. Thankyou again