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Paul Bell

Date: 11/11/2024 3:06:00 AM

Ah, many a randy lad has lost his Rolex in the height of passion. Probably why time flies by when you're having fun.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/11/2024 6:21:00 AM

This is getting very deep Paul, but not so much that anything temporal is going over my head lol! Cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/20/2024 4:07:00 PM

Oh no, a Rolex is missing as is one laddered stocking (adds imagry). Sounds like it was worth the drama. It's getting closer , Dia de Los muertos and cuties in costumes. Good one, David. Right up Lawless'z alley.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/24/2024 4:35:00 PM

Yep! Gotta love em romcom's, they crack me up.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/22/2024 2:33:00 PM

Genius Anaya lol!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 4:08:00 PM

....a closer look this is a Romcom...you see he finds the Rolex and one fake eyelash in the car seat...he finally locates her, apologizes, discovers she is a rocket scientist. It's love ever after.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/21/2024 1:30:00 AM

You can never tell when Lawlessness abounds lol! don’t think I’ve ever gotten a placement in any of John’s contests. Hope you have a great (day of the dead) I think Halloween sounds safer lol! Cheers David

Terry Flood

Date: 10/20/2024 3:05:00 PM

Well, David, you might have known she’d be bad for your ticker! Hope that Rolex was knock off.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/20/2024 3:24:00 PM

Of course it was Terry, I reckon the stocking cost more, still it might come in handy for my next erm withdrawal from the post office lol! Cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 10/20/2024 2:24:00 PM

Well, well, well, Ranger David. Now it all makes sense... the nights no one can find you when you're needed in Milton Creek. The days, too for that matter, and we all knew exactly where to find you, at the Bor..... Boarding house down the street where you tell us you do their handy work. I'm sure you're quite handy at what you do. You must have quite a collection of ladies' lacy things by now.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2024 2:50:00 PM

Not a problem, cowboy. I've always covered for you. ;-)

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/20/2024 2:38:00 PM

Haha I never seen this one coming Lin, a great comment (no comment) well just one but I must be careful, yeah now I remember oh right the boarding house, that old place has gone to hell since I hung up my Tools lol! Thanks so much for giving me some wriggle room lol! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/20/2024 1:37:00 PM

All the OMGs David! I think you meant entrepreneur haha :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/20/2024 2:11:00 PM

Ahem! Yes Of course what was I thinking Dilly, she was a class act lol! Cheers David