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I almost tossed it out

The day was long, her eyelashes longer 
batting them, only drove my lust stronger 
I was light on my feet, she’d light fingers
I traversed hot coals, yet coldness lingers 
How cruel this night, corrupt and broken 
Rolex watch gone, one silk hose her token 
(I almost tossed it out), but couldn’t part 
that laddered stocking, of a high-class tart 

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2024

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Paul Bell Date: 11/11/2024 3:06:00 AM Ah, many a randy lad has lost his Rolex in the height of passion. Probably why time flies by when you're having fun. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/11/2024 6:21:00 AM This is getting very deep Paul, but not so much that anything temporal is going over my head lol! Cheers David

I Am Anaya Date: 10/20/2024 4:07:00 PM Oh no, a Rolex is missing as is one laddered stocking (adds imagry). Sounds like it was worth the drama. It's getting closer , Dia de Los muertos and cuties in costumes. Good one, David. Right up Lawless'z alley. Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/24/2024 4:35:00 PM Yep! Gotta love em romcom's, they crack me up. David Kavanagh Date: 10/22/2024 2:33:00 PM Genius Anaya lol! I Am Anaya Date: 10/21/2024 4:08:00 PM ....a closer look this is a Romcom...you see he finds the Rolex and one fake eyelash in the car seat...he finally locates her, apologizes, discovers she is a rocket scientist. It's love ever after. David Kavanagh Date: 10/21/2024 1:30:00 AM You can never tell when Lawlessness abounds lol! don’t think I’ve ever gotten a placement in any of John’s contests. Hope you have a great (day of the dead) I think Halloween sounds safer lol! Cheers David

Terry Flood Date: 10/20/2024 3:05:00 PM Well, David, you might have known she’d be bad for your ticker! Hope that Rolex was knock off. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 10/20/2024 3:24:00 PM Of course it was Terry, I reckon the stocking cost more, still it might come in handy for my next erm withdrawal from the post office lol! Cheers David

Lin Lane Date: 10/20/2024 2:24:00 PM Well, well, well, Ranger David. Now it all makes sense... the nights no one can find you when you're needed in Milton Creek. The days, too for that matter, and we all knew exactly where to find you, at the Bor..... Boarding house down the street where you tell us you do their handy work. I'm sure you're quite handy at what you do. You must have quite a collection of ladies' lacy things by now. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/20/2024 2:50:00 PM Not a problem, cowboy. I've always covered for you. ;-) David Kavanagh Date: 10/20/2024 2:38:00 PM Haha I never seen this one coming Lin, a great comment (no comment) well just one but I must be careful, yeah now I remember oh right the boarding house, that old place has gone to hell since I hung up my Tools lol! Thanks so much for giving me some wriggle room lol! Cheers David