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I Adore Stunning Spring

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I see pretty flowers in gardens and bowers Vivid gold daffodils line the banks of deep rills Fledgling chicks spread their wings listen as songbirds sings Little lambs play in fields I love all that spring yields Theme 2 nature inspired Alexandrine - Modified Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart Checked with how many syllables 03/23/20

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2020 5:04:00 PM

Your poem was VERY well done, Jan. Love it! Congrats on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 3/27/2020 9:55:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love nature poems and this Spring poem is delightful, those images are so sweet _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/26/2020 2:18:00 AM

Back to congratulate you Jan. You know how much I loved this by my Fave! xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2020 10:53:00 PM

Back with great big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/25/2020 8:21:00 AM

Such a lovely spring-like piece Jan I really enjoyed this one. How are you on IOM? hope you're well and healthy in midst of the present crisis. Blessings always, Gordon

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/25/2020 1:38:00 AM

This poem stole my heart Jan. I loved your poem and the pictures! This is a Fave for me and I hope it gets a top win! xxoo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/25/2020 12:49:00 AM

You made me laughed then proved you could also delight and Spring to flowing life via words. You are a talent. This is stunning in 8 lines. To me, this is already a winner. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/24/2020 8:07:00 PM

Hello Jan … spring is the awakening season with your couplets leading as examples of colour, new life, and welcoming choruses - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/24/2020 3:57:00 PM

lovely, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2020 1:32:00 PM

- Have the lambs already been born? ... one of the most beautiful spring signs, Jan - A wonderful poem - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/24/2020 12:10:00 PM

We shall all hope the beauty of Spring on IOM overwhelms COVID-19! Nicely done, Jan! Aloha! Rico

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 3/24/2020 9:31:00 AM

you picked some some great photo's as well as words..........GB

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/23/2020 11:24:00 PM

Delightful stroll through springtime, my friend - like an Easter day parade. Really lifted my spirits on this grey day. Good luck in the contest. Really enjoyed your poetic picture!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/23/2020 9:58:00 PM

Lovely for Dear Hearts contest. A poem of cheer, of color, and nature yielding. Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/23/2020 9:57:00 PM

So sweet that I wonder whether or not there's any sugar left on the shelves! Just lovely, Jan! Cheers, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/23/2020 9:56:00 PM

A delight to read this this snowy spring day. No daffodils, yet... Keep well <3 xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/23/2020 7:52:00 PM

I love the vibrant imagery in this, especially the lambs playing, wonderful entry for the contest, Jan!

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 3/23/2020 6:53:00 PM

Beautifully written Jan. I love spring too. Best wishes..Ron x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2020 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Ron it is so lovely to see the beautiful daffodils on an estate about 10 miles from home and also the new born lambs - I took lots of pictures last week and we are going back tomorrow - we are almost on lock down here we must n't socialise but can go out to shop for essentials and can go for a walk as long as we keep 2 meters away from others. stay safe:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/23/2020 6:40:00 PM

a very beautiful tribute to spring Awesome poem!! You are truly amazing.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2020 6:57:00 PM

aww Mark you are too kind, I did start a melancholy poem for the contest but ditched it in favour of a more uplifting poem. I am determined to keep positive and have fun with writing - we have 13 cases now confirmed and life is going to get more challenging as the weeks go on:-( hugs Jan xx