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10/12/23

How are you feeling today - one liner

Third Place

Contest by Silent One.

I WISH wish to pass away peacefully watching daughters beside my death bed.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 11:18:00 AM

This is poignant and I hope you stay with us as long as possible

Ink Empress

Date: 10/13/2023 7:43:00 AM

This made me tear up, so heart touching. And the thought of passing away, is sad. Very deeply emotive monoku, one line can evoke so many thoughts and feelings, that is evident in your poem. Loved this

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2023 6:55:00 AM

- A lovely wish, Anisha :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/12/2023 6:29:00 AM

Oh my, that's really so heartfelt dear poetess.. Such an emotional take for the contest and you've expressed a rollercoaster of feelings within such few words.. Sigh.. Death is inevitable but what can make it immortal are the memories of our loved ones.. Absolutely love this..sending lots of love n light to you!!