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I V He sat quietly in the incoporeal thought theater of confusion never listening to everpresent unsatisfied yet insatisible quivering thoughtfulls of glowing fantasies intrepid night romances doing the don’ts of life and society I can taste you in my dreams touch you in my nonsleep care for your waterfall uncommon in luxury midnite delicious door chime renedevous windcaste fate meld of mind and soul of flesh and time, one nonapart minute embracement (and close my eyes) dave collins

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Date: 7/13/2015 12:38:00 AM
DAVE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Dave. GREAT win.
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Date: 3/6/2014 3:03:00 PM
Dave congratulations on your well deserved win. I can see why you placed in this contest. Nicely written - Connie
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Date: 3/5/2014 12:43:00 PM
Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:20:00 AM
Dave, Congrats on placing at top in contest!!
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:55:00 AM
- Dave, congratulations on your great winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:33:00 AM
Creative write Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:12:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Dave.
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Date: 3/5/2014 5:05:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, dave
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Date: 11/15/2013 9:55:00 PM
Dave This is an intriguing write. Makes the reader think and feel. Nice job
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Date: 5/1/2013 2:22:00 PM
Interesting lines that you have penned..Sara
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