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I Am a Poem

I AM A POEM Imaginative illustration intricately impassioned impeccable individualism important Accomplished arrangement ageless authenticity appraised actualized alive Perfection personified paint-brushed panoramic poignant paradigms personal Overabundance optimized optimistic omniscienct oceans outshined original Enraptured edition elevated endearment effervescent embodiment exclusive Magnificent meaning meritorious muse miraculously majestic moral I am a saint sanctified by God through His Son Jesus I AM A POEM

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Earl Schumacker

Date: 4/14/2014 12:01:00 PM

Hi Kim, I see you are not afraid to explore new forms of poetic expression and utilize a vast lexicon of words to create interesting worlds in your poetry. They say variety is the spice of life. (I don't know who they are...but I think they're right.) I am enjoying the spice and variety in your creations. Keep up the good work. Also: Thank you so much for your very kind remarks about Cascadia. Regards, Earl

Tom Valles

Date: 11/27/2013 3:00:00 PM

Brilliant, wonderful writing. So appreciate your testimony.

Patrick Nigros

Date: 10/14/2013 11:31:00 AM

TRULLY YOU ARE A POEM WRITTEN BY THE PEN INKED WITH THE BLOOD OF OUR GLORIOUS LORD

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/1/2013 2:19:00 PM

Very much inspiring work Kim.May I add that this was truly exceptional work on your part.

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/14/2013 8:52:00 AM

Beautiful piece, very descriptive towards all a poem is! Than you for sharing this. - Edward

Edward Orozco
Date: 6/14/2013 8:53:00 AM

Thank u** :D

Kim Morrison

Date: 6/13/2013 5:59:00 PM

This is a very interesting and well crafted poem. Congrats Kim!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/12/2013 7:27:00 AM

Good morning

Kim Van Breda
Date: 6/12/2013 7:42:00 AM

Hi Richard... you guys in the USA a bit slower than us this side of the tide in SA :) Time here is 3-40pm. Trying to find inspiration to post something really clever, but ended up reading everyone else's latest posts instead. I guess I still have an hour or two before I have to do dinner....if the inspiration comes. Got as far as a title x

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/10/2013 6:13:00 PM

I love it that you chose an inspirational message that inspired you to write such a magnificent poem. Exceptional ! Outstanding ! :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/10/2013 12:10:00 PM

Thanks to all fellow P/Soup people for your positive and encouraging comments on this one. It meant a lot as this poem was inspired by the message we had at church this past Sunday-- we are all intricately woven and perfected-- like a poem.. through our Creator.. I love it when God gets the Glory :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/10/2013 9:27:00 AM

Tremendous!! Ah, the declaration is wonderful here!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/10/2013 1:25:00 AM

Some of the best alliteration I've seen... it's not an easy style to write in, but you did it splendidly! I hope your pages continue on for years to come :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 6/9/2013 3:18:00 PM

IAPOEM... beautifully crafted poem with each letter carefully engraved in each stanza. This is a beautiful work of art.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2013 2:29:00 PM

- Love it... at first line to the last, Kim - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/9/2013 1:44:00 PM

He was on a roll when he wrote you!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/9/2013 11:17:00 AM

Kim you got me all smiles after reading this gem. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Really enjoyed reading you tonight ;) *hugs* Wilma

Julie Heckman

Date: 6/9/2013 11:10:00 AM

what a fun ride...thanks for commenting on my poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 9:14:00 AM

I love Alliteration, a beautiful ending Kim, i have tried out this for a few times. It was introduced by a fellow soup poet, who loves alliteration. Alive is the feeling... God Bless...Linda