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I Am a Poem

I AM A POEM

Imaginative illustration
intricately impassioned
impeccable individualism
important

Accomplished arrangement
ageless authenticity
appraised actualized
alive

Perfection personified 
paint-brushed panoramic
poignant paradigms
personal

Overabundance optimized
optimistic omniscienct
oceans outshined
original

Enraptured edition
elevated endearment
effervescent  embodiment
exclusive

Magnificent meaning
meritorious muse
miraculously majestic
moral

I am a saint
sanctified by God
through His Son
Jesus


I AM A POEM

Copyright © Kim Van Breda | Year Posted 2013

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Earl Schumacker Date: 4/14/2014 12:01:00 PM Hi Kim, I see you are not afraid to explore new forms of poetic expression and utilize a vast lexicon of words to create interesting worlds in your poetry. They say variety is the spice of life. (I don't know who they are...but I think they're right.) I am enjoying the spice and variety in your creations. Keep up the good work. Also: Thank you so much for your very kind remarks about Cascadia. Regards, Earl Login to Reply

Tom Valles Date: 11/27/2013 3:00:00 PM Brilliant, wonderful writing. So appreciate your testimony. Login to Reply

Patrick Nigros Date: 10/14/2013 11:31:00 AM TRULLY YOU ARE A POEM WRITTEN BY THE PEN INKED WITH THE BLOOD OF OUR GLORIOUS LORD Login to Reply

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/1/2013 2:19:00 PM Very much inspiring work Kim.May I add that this was truly exceptional work on your part. Login to Reply

Edward Orozco Date: 6/14/2013 8:52:00 AM Beautiful piece, very descriptive towards all a poem is! Than you for sharing this. - Edward Login to Reply Edward Orozco Date: 6/14/2013 8:53:00 AM Thank u** :D

Kim Morrison Date: 6/13/2013 5:59:00 PM This is a very interesting and well crafted poem. Congrats Kim! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/12/2013 7:27:00 AM Good morning Login to Reply Kim Van Breda Date: 6/12/2013 7:42:00 AM Hi Richard... you guys in the USA a bit slower than us this side of the tide in SA :) Time here is 3-40pm. Trying to find inspiration to post something really clever, but ended up reading everyone else's latest posts instead. I guess I still have an hour or two before I have to do dinner....if the inspiration comes. Got as far as a title x

Karen Anglesey Date: 6/10/2013 6:13:00 PM I love it that you chose an inspirational message that inspired you to write such a magnificent poem. Exceptional ! Outstanding ! :) Login to Reply

Kim Van Breda Date: 6/10/2013 12:10:00 PM Thanks to all fellow P/Soup people for your positive and encouraging comments on this one. It meant a lot as this poem was inspired by the message we had at church this past Sunday-- we are all intricately woven and perfected-- like a poem.. through our Creator.. I love it when God gets the Glory :) Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 6/10/2013 9:27:00 AM Tremendous!! Ah, the declaration is wonderful here! Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 6/10/2013 1:25:00 AM Some of the best alliteration I've seen... it's not an easy style to write in, but you did it splendidly! I hope your pages continue on for years to come :) Login to Reply

Christine Phillips Date: 6/9/2013 3:18:00 PM IAPOEM... beautifully crafted poem with each letter carefully engraved in each stanza. This is a beautiful work of art. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/9/2013 2:29:00 PM - Love it... at first line to the last, Kim - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/9/2013 1:44:00 PM He was on a roll when he wrote you! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/9/2013 11:17:00 AM Kim you got me all smiles after reading this gem. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Really enjoyed reading you tonight ;) *hugs* Wilma Login to Reply

Julie Heckman Date: 6/9/2013 11:10:00 AM what a fun ride...thanks for commenting on my poem. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/9/2013 9:14:00 AM I love Alliteration, a beautiful ending Kim, i have tried out this for a few times. It was introduced by a fellow soup poet, who loves alliteration. Alive is the feeling... God Bless...Linda Login to Reply