I

Staring at the album before me,
Memories came floating around me,
Dancing memories of good and old,
Came rushing and flooding my mind.

The front page of the album bears,
A smiling child in his birth suit,
Casting a cute shy look,
He showed his grace and beauty.

I stopped turning the pages,
When I saw a boy in trousers,
He was so naughty at times,
Running around the house all time.

Next page holds the picture of a man,
In a neat and nice wedding suit,
Looking so handsome and hot,
He showed his strength and power.

Then I closed the book of memories,
And looked up at the mirror in front,
There I saw an old gentleman,
Waiting for his time to come.

Yesterday’s I is today’s I,
Today’s I will be tomorrow’s I,
Whatever changes happens around,
I am I and that will not change. 


Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT 3 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
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Kinard Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 5:18 PM
I like the your poem of I, I wrote a poem called the Story of I, and I think the way you did your album was very good. Nicely done.
Somadas Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Robert.. I will sure try to read it..
Inman Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 5:03 PM
A great write Jenish. Time never stops but we remain ourselves despite time.
Somadas Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Thank you for your valuable comment James..
Chiri Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on your placement!;)
Somadas Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Thank you Brenda..
Neumann Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 4:39 AM
We are the change and the mirror. Kind wishes, Kai
Somadas Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Thank you for the insight..
La France Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Jenish, wow what a powerful poem, amazing.. can you check your soupmail !
Somadas Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Thank you.. Ok..I will check..
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December 15, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Jenish, Such a nice album in your poem 'I'. And a deserving life and treasure in moments that still allowed you to remain you. What else could anyone ask? -Richard
Somadas Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:15 PM
True Richard.. Thank you for your valuable comment..
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 6:26 AM
I enjoyed this reflection back on life and your last line is powerfully true. Well written :)
Somadas Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Thank you Heidi...
Trifiatis Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 2:57 AM
Introspective and profound poem dear, Jenish. Well written my friend.
Somadas Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 5:23 AM
Thank you Demetrios..
Buehler Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 11:38 PM
Jenish I enjoyed the trip down memory lane. Great poem! :)
Somadas Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Evelyn...
Wolf Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Enjoyed this reflective write, Jenish. Thanks, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Happy to hear that you enjoyed it.. Thanks..
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 7:02 AM
I liked the way you walked the reader through phases of life--indeed the memories make one ponder and reflect on life--as you have done here. A special write, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Krutsinger Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 11:50 PM
"Yesterday’s I is today’s I, Today’s I will be tomorrow’s I," no matter where you go, there you are. Nicely done. Nostalgic and poignant.
Somadas Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Thank you Caren...
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