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I move like mercury bobbing lightly just under the surface of thought I am the breeze that caresses the white-washed linen curtain whispering belief that it can fly I pacify the inevitable until it relents to the crack of a new dawn I kiss time until the moments pass, and embrace still I am the space between the end and remembrance of what is I linger softly just under the moons glow watching I amuse my maker as I taunt between love and hate I am the breath of the awakening just at the moment of revelation radiant colors descend and soothe slowly washing judgment into rainbows of purity I am the whisper of hope the promise of possibility in the endless existence of infinite space

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Date: 11/28/2018 11:10:00 PM
keep it up...mysteriously clear...good works
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 11/29/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 11/2/2018 4:19:00 PM
Your free verse is just sublime and profound, actually makes me jealous! But I am now an official fan of yours!
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Date: 10/26/2018 7:26:00 PM
Wonderfully penned, love this verse James~
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Date: 10/23/2018 10:07:00 AM
You have such an exquisitely simple, yet elegant way of wording things, my friend! This is both lovely and deep! ;)
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 10/26/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thank you my dear!!!
Date: 10/22/2018 8:20:00 AM
..."I pacify the inevitable until it relents" WOW.....what a line!!! Damn good write Gabrielle with some subtle, thought provoking, line breaks. Well Done!
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Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 10/26/2018 9:28:00 AM
Hi John, how are you? Many thanks. Have a great day!

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